| "Our Agreement" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: caleb On: August 23, 2005 12:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like the story but the rape kind off scares me but so do you sometimes so i get over it
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Title: Heh...
Reviewed By: Fukufuku Shita On: October 18, 2004 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Nanashi. I finaly get to finish the fan fic you were lettin me read in class now eh? Anywho, good job on originality and the sadistic humor we've all come to love... A couple thing's wrong with it though. The most obvious can be corrected with spell check... The other being the lack of detail. I know people hear this a lot in writing, but detail is what makes you're writing come to life. You need to put more into it instead of making it dialouge based. Other than that it's fine and an overall, excellent fanfic. Keep it coming. ~Fluffy
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Title: Death
Reviewed By: Zetsumei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. Nice story so far, it's quite original. Anyways i was just wondering if you were gonna keep going with it.
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