| "Fight For Thy Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: Luscious On: October 26, 2004 22:23 CDT
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oMG! i feel so bad 4 u!! no starbux! that wud kill me! i hope u feel better. ur story still kicks ass i love the way u write. unfortunatly few writers live up to the standards ur at now so their stories seem so blah now. it's hard to find good stories these days. o well. I think i kno who the magicians reincarnation is. the kaigen guy right? o the plot thickens. poor kagome and youko. the contest and now this?! ur so mean to ur characters....I LOVE IT!! u haf a deliciously sadistic mind! o fun fun fun! update soon.
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: October 26, 2004 18:07 CDT
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The way you wrote that last line suggests that she will meet someone and rethink her choice...
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: October 10, 2004 20:58 CDT
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*twitches madly* well, it took me a while to remember what happened before.... managed it though ^_^.... I have to cut down on fics..... but that's impossible knowing me... *sighs* anyhow, ummm. Actually I think that's it.... hehehe
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Reviewed By: Luscious On: October 07, 2004 20:02 CDT
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KOUGA HAS A GRANDSON?!!!! LMAO! kaggys in 4 a BIG suprise. HAHA! I just love these stories with a ton of hott guys fighting over a girl *sigh* i wish that were me. O well! we got more imp things goin on. Like ur next update. This story still kicks ass. I can;t wait 2 find out wut happens nxt. ... i hope these codes work. lol. ne ways. update soon. I LOVE UR WORK!
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 07:36 CDT
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dude! love the new chappy!! i can not wait for the next update!! and kouga has a grand son!!! *chants hotty* yeah!! alright! so u update as soon as u can!! and i will read it!! that is the plan!now all u have to do is to update soon!! and i can not wait to c what will happen between all the couples!!! so plz update soon!! and never for get the love!!!
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Reviewed By: snowecat On: October 02, 2004 11:36 CDT
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You're still missing words and abusing homonyms, I thought you would have improved. Please pay more attention to your work, it's damaging an otherwise wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*applauds* Great chapter, minimal action, but it made up for it in... I dunno what to call it... T_T It's too early/late to be writing reviews... Great chapter anyways... as to how many times you'll have to steal Ganko back from someone... it depends on how many times you let him be stolen!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 00:37 CDT
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*points in oppisite direction* But the shirtless Ganko's that way *smiles innocently* Yay! New chapter!
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 11:03 CDT
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maha! me cannot wait to c ganko wit no shirt!! me love shitrless guys!!! *drools* any way!! plz update soon!! i am loving this story!! and much love never forget the love!! the love is what makes the story so great!!! and i am really liking the plot!! so many bad guys to hate!!! i love to hate! weird i no but hey that is just the way i am!!! so plz udpate soon!! love and peace!!!
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Reviewed By: kireishi On: August 24, 2004 22:01 CDT
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PICCY!!! PICCYPICCYPICCYPICCYPICCY!!!!~ i cant wait for the piccy of ganko! im gunna save it then print it! muahahahah *cue thunger and lightening* ... so ne ways. i love the chappie! update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: Luscious On: August 24, 2004 20:02 CDT
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hehe.... im sticking with mm.org now it much nicer 2 me. more plot twists *sigh* poor kagome and poor kurama. ur so mean to them.... i love it! muahaha! yeah they r so gunna hate me now lol. hmm.... im thinkin of taking chiisai up on her offer but that runs the risk of u not completeing the story... *sigh* decisions decisions.... i like the story better. SRY CHIISAI!! hehe ne ways ill b waiting for the nxt update. ur story kix butt!!
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 07:57 CDT
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yet another great chappy! for which i can not wait for the next udpate!! it will surelly b just as great as the last!! much love never forget the love the love it what makes the story so great!! and plz update soon!! i am loving this story!!!
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 11:00 CDT
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maha! i love the story!! i can not wait for the next udpate!! this is like the best story ever!! i hope that u update soon!! and much love never forget the love!!!! the love is what makes the storys so great!!!
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Title: HIHI!! its moi again! jkjk >
Reviewed By: lil_angel_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font Color HI!! ^^ IM KEEP ON FORGETTING TO GO TO MM.ORG! but then i remembered when i was looking at my email thingy and boom! here i am.. >< this is like..a REALLY old sn, and i have YET to get a new one.. i blame this on my lazyness.. ne who, im soo glad that this story is on mm.org now ^^ woohoo! update asap and email me!
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Title: Normal POV
Reviewed By: Rei Akuma Minamino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's easier to follow the story through 3rd person than it is in 1st person POV. I liked Kagome no Kitsune and the POV setting were okay, it's just it would have been easier if in Normal POV mode.
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