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Reviewed By: SacredArrow89 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2005 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!.. omg!!. your story is so awesome.. i love it.. i can't wait for more.. i wonder whats going to happen.. is inuyasha really going to come?.. hmm.. i have soi many unanswered questions and omg!!.. well i hope they get answered within the next few chapters!.. later!
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Title: jap translations
Reviewed By: Myst Runner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 11:49 CST
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you wanted the Jap translations for Love, Warrior, and First Born. Love=koi(romantic attachment), ai(passionate attachment, affection), seiai(sexual love), and koibito(sweetheart) Warrior=senshi, samurai, and bushi(Japanese warrior) but i can't tell yah First Born. dictonaries don't have it in them.
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Reviewed By: sweet_heawrt [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just started reading this story today and then my username screwed up so I had to get another one before I could finish it...boy was I happy when you updated...lol...I love it...It's really original, and keeps me on my toes. Keep up the good writing and I understand why you might not be able to up date because of school. It interfers with my reading also...lol Love Me
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 21:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
cools beans.
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 20:52 CDT
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luvin it. plz tell me kikyo dies in sum god awful, painful bloody death by kagomes very hands. ok, that was a lil specific but i jus dont like that damned corpse! there's the understatement of the milenia... newho, update soon. ~Cat~
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: August 24, 2004 18:20 CDT
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Awwwww! What a cute chapter! hehehehe LOVES IT!!! I'm glad that Inuyasha was put into his place even though I still like the boy, lol. There was lots of cutesy stuff between Sess and Kag that was wonderful as well. I especially liked the ending, hehehe. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work!!! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: roseblade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 18:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
love it
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Title: saruko
Reviewed By: Saruko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
for some reason I really didn't think that the cook was rude at all, but telling kagome that she wasn't to be there is probably to be expected, but sessho-kuns comment about her being stinky was equally as good as the whole story! I can't wait to see what goes on in the next chapter! saruko
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Title: saruko
Reviewed By: Saruko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea, sesshomaru now takes kagome to his house/castle! it is so cool!
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Title: saruko
Reviewed By: Saruko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that cliffy was so mean! inuyasha is so jelous now! ha ha ha! I can't wait to read the next chapter. ai saruko
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Reviewed By: saruko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha is a horrible, well not really but to kagome he is. it is good that Kagome decides to leave him. I love your story I can't wait to read the next one!! ai saruko
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 02:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
cools beans.
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Reviewed By: PJ On: August 20, 2004 23:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a great story I usually don't read Sessy/Kag fics but this one is interesting. One thing tho from what you wrote it sounds like Sessy has the same poison as Naraku? Which is kind of a 'purple color'. I know Sessy has the nice colored markings on his face but his poison from his claws is green colored and it melts things from what i remember when he was fighting Inu at his father's grave. He tried to kill Kagome and Tessiaga protected her but everything around her got melted and it gave off some sort of 'stinky smell' and they all had to get away from it. But it is your story so I guess it really doesn't matter I was just 'making conversation' Update again soon
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Title: wicked
Reviewed By: Laina On: August 20, 2004 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gotta say I loved the cchapter. It really was what we were all waiting for. I can't wait to read the next one... you said you were posting on monday? GREAT!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 02:27 CDT
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Ouch Poor Inu. great story. Keep up the great work.
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