| "Catching your breath" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kikari On: July 19, 2004 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bah!! I love this story please write more! i've never read a bakura/reader story before so im very in love with this one. so please update! please!!!!!! I love bakura and i want to know what happens next, does the reader get severly injured or comes out without a scratch? please once again update. sincerly, Kikari
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Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 10:12 CDT
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I right, all done... evil person... Cliffie... evil person...
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Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 10:04 CDT
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Sweetie... Before I got to Chaooie 2... there is a card called Chosen One... i'm holding it right now... Anyways off to finish the story!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: lilonna_eternity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 17:40 CDT
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AAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW C'MON NOTTA DAMN CLIFFIE o well UPDATE SOON VERY SOON ^.^
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Reviewed By: tsutsuji [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 08:38 CDT
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This is the first CYOA I've read, I like it even better than I expected! Well, getting kidnapped by Bakura, how could I not like it?! Nasty cliffhanger, though! Update please! (and late Happy Birthday!)
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Reviewed By: tsutsuji [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 08:38 CDT
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This is the first CYOA I've read, I like it even better than I expected! Well, getting kidnapped by Bakura, how could I not like it?! Nasty cliffhanger, though! Update please! (and late Happy Birthday!)
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Reviewed By: anonomous On: July 09, 2004 20:19 CDT
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH NOT A DAMN CLIFFY!!!! SCREW YOU DO YOU HEAR ME SCREW YOU!!!! nah im just kiddin, great story hurry and update i practically fell out of my chair^_^
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Master Duelist Kaori [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 15:34 CDT
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Awesome, its just.. awesome. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 13:26 CDT
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No a cliffy! Please update soon.
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Title: Oh Gods....................
Reviewed By: Lunitic on da loose On: July 09, 2004 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohmigosh!PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ UPDATE SOONLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! JA NE!!!!!!!!! ~Izumi Princess Of Darkness
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: inu-sessfan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 13:02 CDT
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omg sweet hot and sexy is all 4 me^_^please update and idin't u say that today was ur b-day
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Reviewed By: ShadowRose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 12:40 CDT
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teehee that was awesome! please update soon, and HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
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Reviewed By: DarkBlueKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 12:13 CDT
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Awesome story. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: XP-DarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 12:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>< damn i just got blown up lol update soon
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Reviewed By: Black Dragon of Fire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 11:19 CDT
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yeah you updated woohoo! ^0^ go for Me I so stong and not an air head.YES!Plaese continue.(And my conciense actuallly told me that) +__+
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