| "Kagome Higurashi: Rising Star" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Gothic Kagome On: March 17, 2006 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it it was soo cool so you seriously need to start writing more chappys not author notes sorry but its true because your story was great!
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Reviewed By: princess of the west On: March 16, 2006 02:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i have to say that your story is some what original and that slut kinkyho is there again causing our poor kagome pain and not just emotional but physical pain now -_-# grrr now in comes our sessho to rescure kagome and save her life. concerned golden eyes i like that part a lot but you stoped at a really good part because i wanted to see sessho pick kagome up 'bridal syle' after beating the living shit out of inu and then taking kagome away,tell ing inuyasha "stay away from kagome,if i even hear that you were in the same nieborhood as kagome i will make your life hell inuyasha,you and your whore" he walks away with kagome in his arms he drives away and now is at his home,his manior. 'how could inuyasha do that to her,saying that he loves her one moment then hitting and strangling her the next?' 'no matter,it won't happen again,it should have never happend' he walks to his bedroom knowing that inuyasha knows where he lives and will try to come and hurt kagome and maybe even kill her. 'no i won't let that happen' you see sessho secretly adores kagome and has sent her small gifts like white roses and jewelry,at that thought 'jewelry that i see kikyou wearing instead of kagome'his blood boiled at the thought and site of the whore wearing what was kagome's and became angrier that he had bought it. 'i won't let him him or anyone else hurt again koishii,if inuyasha even looks at you i will kill him'sesshomaru laid kagome gently on the bed coverd with silk sheets that matched her eyes exactly. sesshomaru brought a warm cloth and wraped it around kagome's throught to help ease the pain. then he checked her body for other inguries and became enraged by what he found,he saw bruises and cuts on her arms,legs and he touched her face and saw makeup on his hand,he took the cloth and wiped away the foundation and saw the black eye that inuyasha had given kagome. well you can gues what happens after that,kagome wakes up and sees sesshomaru and asks where she is and why did he stop inuyasha? sessho will tell kagome that he saw what inuyasha was doing and that he might have killed her if he hadn't been there to stop him. kagome pales at this and knows now that she has to stay away from inuyasha and kikyou or they will kill her. kagome thanks sesshomaru for his help and asks where she is and he tells her in the manior on my estate,he tells kagome that he would like if she agreed to stay here because he knows that inuyasha and kikyou will come after kagome and try to kill her and because none of there friends are strong enough to stop inuyasha she will be in danger and her friends too. kagome thinks about this and knows that sessho is much stronger then inuyasha and that he will be able to protect and her friends won't be in danger trying to protect her from inu and kikyou. kagome agrees to stay with him saying that she needs to get her suit case from her car because she had packed her things in it and had planned on leaving inuyasha tonight. sessho shakes his head saying 'no kagome,tomorrow i'm going to take you shopping for new clothes,i don't want you to wear anything that came from there or that he gave you understand?' kagome nodds her head in agreement but really doesn't understand 'sessho why can't i wear my other clothes?' sesshomaru sighs there's two reasons why he doesn't want her to wear them and 1. inuyasha will be able to spot her better in her old clothing.2. he just wants to take her shopping and to pamper and lavish gifts on her without telling her,that he adores her. instead he says 'kagome inuyasha would be able to spot you better in your other things that in new ones and i would like to buy different clothes because in order to protect you i have to be able to see you and be near you so i was going to make you my new personal assistant and from there you would be at my side always.' kagome thinks about this and likes the idea of a new look and clothes'alright,i'll do it' sessho smiles 'can't wait to take her shopping'
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Reviewed By: dark miko of shadows On: November 20, 2005 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv this story pleas write the the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Blue crescent moon On: October 03, 2005 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. please update asap. I'm a huge Sesshy/Kag fan.
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Reviewed By: groovygirl On: October 02, 2005 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your fanfic. Please update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter and see what happens. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Blackrose451 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU SHOULD CONTINUE THE STORY! IT'S GREAT! PLEASE PLEASE KEEP UP THE STORY!
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Reviewed By: Baka-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 01:41 CST
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Title: oi....
Reviewed By: koga711 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 17:31 CST
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Oi....there's no more......? you can't just leave it there! It's really really good......-pout- now why isn't there more...?
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 02:16 CDT
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I like it. Though not necessarily Inu being the bad guy, but then again someone does. So what is going to happen next. Btw the song fitted perfectly. cools beans.
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Reviewed By: inumiko17 On: August 20, 2004 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is really good. i kinda that inuyasha is bad but he plays the bad guy well. and whats going on with my man sessy? anyway, pls update soon!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kioko Yasha Mai On: July 23, 2004 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic, it's soo good!I'm really tired of InuYasha being the good guy, this is good!And it has my Sesshoumaru in it, Yay!
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Reviewed By: Astrid-chan On: July 15, 2004 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it`s a really good story! ^-^ you have to continue writing it! i gave you all 10s `cause i`m not really good at rating, but I liked it anyways >< ...yea, continue it! ^^;;
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon i want to kno what happens :)ITS RELLY GOOD SO FAR
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Reviewed By: Hn On: July 07, 2004 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was a dark chapter.I LIKE IT!!!Please write more oh please!!!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 21:44 CDT
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hey, I like this. You have a good start to the story and have great potential to develop this story to into something truly amazing. Keep up the good work and I hope to read more from you soon.
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