"Just Desserts" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Matt MacGyver Santini [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 00:30 CDT Comment/Review: Alright loking good. So are you going through with one from a guys point of view. If you're not, I would like to, with your permission of course. It's still looking good, a little hard for me to read, getting around the whole girl point of veiw thing but I still like it. How often does that sort of thing occur? MacGyver
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Reviewed By: Archeress Of Apollo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 00:49 CDT Comment/Review: hmmm *adopts a more dignified tone, sits with legs, crossed sipping tea with my pinky jutting out* ah, yes, darling, a lovely chapter ^_^ i do so look forward to more.
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Title: KOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Reviewed By: Izumi Princess Of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 17:58 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AWESOME FICCY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUV IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEEZ UPDATE SOONLY!!!!!!! JA NE!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Izumi Princess Of Darkness
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Reviewed By: inkheart (*yawn*) On: July 27, 2004 13:05 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: DAMN RIGHT I'M ENTHUSIASTIC!!! .......ummmm sorry bout that.......... wow chapter 2 was great........ maybe a bit better than 1 but still awesome!!! ok now who's gonna be a good authoress and update real soon? you are! you are! here (*takes out a bowl of ramen*) have a treat........wait a sec i'm hungry................*gobbles down ramen* *ahem* here! (*takes out a chocolate cookie*) *gives cookie to authoress* you can have this instead.......... mmmmmmmm i love ramen....... I ALSO LOVE THE PRINCESS BRIDE......I HAVE IT ON DVD!!! YAY!! .....*ahem* i also have almost the entire collection of YYH DVDs ..........and Pirates of the Caribbean on DVD too!!! YAY!!! anyway..i got a little off topic there....please update soon and i will continue reding and reviewing........luv ya! byez!
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Reviewed By: angelindigo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 01:35 CDT Comment/Review: I swallowed the shards. Nice touch. ^__^ Who knew other writers could know just how clumsy I am? And how shy I am until I actually meet someone? Awesome. Just spectacular
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Reviewed By: Venora Strikes Again [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 23:21 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *sniff* no... miroku pairing...? *sniff* *whimper* b-b-b-b-b-b-b-b-b-b-b-ut---!!! there's chemistry!!! and since i dont know what the pairing is, i dont kow what to call my character!!! (dont ask...) really, i think a miroku pairing would work with the plot! but if not, sesshomaru's good too... but miroku is preferable! fyi!
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Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtIe (not logged in) On: July 26, 2004 20:25 CDT Comment/Review: the parings should be KOGA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 19:45 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was a wondrful chapter!Hope update soon
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Reviewed By: Summing Princess Abigail [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 17:07 CDT Comment/Review: I DO I DO I DO!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!! But intil then I will jump up and down in my chair waiting for the next chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever not logged in On: July 26, 2004 16:49 CDT Comment/Review: I WANNA READ MORE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!! NOW!!!!!! Please? *gives puppy face*
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 15:00 CDT Comment/Review: Wow that was cool. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Matt MacGyver Santini [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 12:29 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yeah, I think it would be cool to see this fic from a guy's point of view. I still like it even if it's supposed to be from a girl's point of view. MacGyver
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Reviewed By: Summing Princess Abigail [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 23:28 CDT Comment/Review: I LOVEY THIS STORY SO FAR SO PLEAZY UPDATEY SOONY!! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!
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Reviewed By: WereAngewomon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 09:23 CDT Comment/Review: Its a great story. I do have a question though is their going to be a pairing between the reader and someone. Ja.
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Reviewed By: AoA (^_~) On: July 13, 2004 20:31 CDT Comment/Review: muahahahaha .... although i've no idea what i'm laughing evilly about ^_^; ah well... ----- so did i tell you i really liked this story? i hope i did, cuz i do ^_^ *dances about* and i can't wait to get to some of those good Miroku jokes. haha. Miroku's so great, just like this story *puts a gold star sticker on it... >.> and one on him as well ^_^*
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