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Title: Daisuki!
Reviewed By: Darksquire [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 14:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... I really liked this story. I read a lot of fan fictions and I have to say this is probably one of the best ones I have ever read. I can't wait to start reading the next one. It took a few days to get all the way through this one though. It was very long. But I like long stories. They make reading them more worth it. I gave you a 9 on originality and Creativity simply because since it is a fan fiction it obviously cannot be to original now can it? But I really loved it. If I had to give a suggestion I would advise a bit more usage of Japanese. I love stories where they through in a bit of nihon-go. But then again... I am in love with Japan and have been studying it and the language for a while now. So yes. Well... I'd better dash. I probably won't review again untill I finish Purity 2. Jolly good show Sue! -Carmi, the odd and anoying person who just talked your ears off for exactly 966 charachters. But who's counting?
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Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 15:51 PDT
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this is one of the best fic pieces I've ever read. great job, and thank you for gracing us with your writing! haha. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 15:08 PDT
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THIS WAS A GREAT STORY AND I ABSOLUTLY LOVED TOGA!!!!! He was sooooooooo cute with the way he repeated every "bad" word InuYasha would say, and the part about INuYasha and Sesshoumaru tearing up Sessy's yard and Kagura's reaction, simple genius, can't wait to read the next story. Till next time, Zirra.
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Title: Love it..
Reviewed By: Inu-Kag15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 13:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! I also love Inu/Kag parings, though i don't mind Kik/Inu parins, i just feel she was his past...lol;) Well, keep up the great work, you are my fav author!!!
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 16:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg...wow!!!! this story was soo sweet and amazing...it showed a totally different side of inuyasha...aww and the romance between those two is so beautiful as well as ur fic!
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Reviewed By: Inu's Tenshi On: March 05, 2005 14:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! ""Just you wait, Kagome!" he muttered as he zipped toward the village. "I'll beat you black and blue, I swear... or---" `Or you could kiss her,' his mind chortled." Geez, I'm still laughing! Anyways, I'm off to read the rest of your fic!
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 11:05 PST
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well kongousouha was supossed to be the ultimate technique of the tetsusaiga but then the ryuujin tetsusaiga came about after he fought dakki/datsuki
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Title: Oh... My... God
Reviewed By: 10princess01 On: February 25, 2005 17:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
words cannot describe the amazingness of this fic... maybe amazing... but I don't think that quite covers it... wow. you are an unbelievable writer and I wish I could write half as good as you, but that isn't the point. The point is that I am in awe from this fic and I LOVE the idea of the sequel! lol Toga was like my favorite character throughout the whole fic lol! I did miss Miroku and Sango, but I think it would have been weird for them to come through the well with Inuyasha so I'm kind of glad they stayed behind. well I could ramble on all day about this fantastic fic, but I'm runnin gout of characters! lol so once again congratulations on your amazingness, and I LOVED this fic! ttyl, TTFN!!!
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Reviewed By: NikoTN [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 00:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the whole story it was great! I tried reading the other version that you had posted long time ago but you stoped working o that one and I figured out that you had been working on this one, but anyways I really enjoyed your writting it was wonderful and had a really great story line.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: February 22, 2005 01:37 PST
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Oh, wow! I just loved this story. All the kiddies were SO cute...I really loved it. And twins! Double trouble...You're an excellent writer, I had such a good time reading. Thanks for the great entertainment!! eap
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Reviewed By: Inugurl11 On: February 20, 2005 21:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you loved writing 'Purity', well i gotta say thats nothin compared to how much i loved reading it! The characters were so colorful and fun, and you did an excellent job, well, with the whole story, dammit!-pun intended;) i was about to cry when Kagome couldn't remember Inuyasha, and almost cried again from laughing so hard when Kagura and Kagome nearly killed Inuyasha and Sesshomaru! I just want to thank sari15 for gettin me interested in reading your fics when she wrote 'Atmosphere' in honor of your birthday. It made me think, dammit (sorry i just can't get over that!), this sueric must be a helluva writer to be friends with as awesome of a writer as sari15, and 4 of your stories are her favorites! And wouldn't ya know it, I was right, for once in a neon moon (I'm a helpless country music fan, 'Neon Moon' is by 'Brooks and Dunn', and I always say 'neon moon', instead of 'blue moon')! But look at my rambling. I'm gonna shut up now so you can get back to your amazing writing! I can't wait to read your other stories, but seein as its past 2 am, i really oughta be gettin to bed! So I guess I'll just say, well, I want to thank your parents for having you so that you could grow up to write these unbelievable stories! (Sorry this review was so unbelievably long, but its late and I can't sleep, so how better to spend it than ramble on to someone I've never met?) ;)
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Title: sweet_T_cocoa_86@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: February 10, 2005 06:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally finished. Not reading it. Printing it all out. I could print all the chapters at once. The people in the liabrary would have been, "Your professors must hate you to make you do all that work." So it took me one week to print out. Yes 7 whole days but that's fine. I like the story so far I have 10 chapters to read and that it! I kinda miss Miroku and Sango but I like the focusing on one couple and their problems instead of a mess load of couples and problems. This story actually makes me kinda like *hiss* but don't get me wrong we'll never be friends. I have to get a new binder and then I'll start on Purity 2. Your fast becoming one of my favorite authors! Love MN
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Title: COOL!
Reviewed By: kagome_inuyasha123 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 16:36 PST
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This is a great story. I have read chapters 1-16. I can't wait to read the rest! Hope you continue writing!
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: planeshaper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 00:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As the title says, I thought it was excellent...guess I'm gonna need to catch up a little and read the two sequels now :)
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Shoukamiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 03:27 PST
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As always I enjoy reading your fics. I look forward to reading more about Toga and more Metamorphosis. You really have a wicked character going in that. Another promising storyline. Keep up the great work. Just as a suggestion but poor Koga never seems to get anything in anyone's fics in the end. I'm gonna try to remedy that in my own fic somehow, though I'm not sure how. Anyways it was just a suggestion for any of your future or ongoing fics. I guess After reading so many fics that make him out to be a bad guy or the one to "take one for the team", so to speak, I really am starting to feel sorry for the dumb wolf.^_^ Anyway it was just a thought.
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