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Title: This is Great (re-write)
Reviewed By: AnimePrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 06:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon I want to what happens next. I'm so gald that Yugi forgive Yami and their happy together. Anzu got what she deserve when Yami dumped her and she better keep her hands off Yugi if she doesn't want Yami to come after her make her pay. I hope Yugi tells Yami how he feel soon. Good luck Yugi and Yami. Keep up the good work and update soon. ^^
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Title: This is Great
Reviewed By: AnimePrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 06:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon I want to what happens next. I'm so gald that Yugi forgive Yami and their happy together and Anzu got what she deserve when Yami dumped her and she better keep her hands off Yugi if she doen't Yami to come after her make her pay. I hope you tell Yami how he feel soon. Good luck Yugi and Yami. Keep up the good work and update soon. ^^
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 01:20 CST
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Really great chapters i liked them alot. Sooo who is ryou gonna end up with and will he tell yugi what happend? Oh and yay yami put anzu in her place she is such a bi***. I'm on the edge of my seat i gotta know what happens next. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Reviewed By: LittleHikari On: November 14, 2004 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Draza On: November 14, 2004 18:07 CST
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*cheers* go yami!!!!! I just started reading your fic today and i must say i'm lovin' it (do not own McDonald's) But there was one point in which i was confused...when did Yugi's friends (excluding yet including Anzu) find out that Yami was inside yugi (IN HIS MIND!!!)? I don't remember reading that. Anyhoo! Please keep writting!!! It's really good! ^.^v
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Reviewed By: Lil'Baby On: November 10, 2004 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, please continue
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 01:19 CST
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Hey ur doing such a great job and i really don't care how long u take as long as u update.I must say that the story is very well thought up and what not.THe plot is well done.Spelling is fine.The grammer is good except for when two ppl r talking to each other such as.:this is the wrong one:"hi yugi"said yami."hi Yami"replied Yugi. the right one:"hi Yugi"said Yami "hi Yami"said yugi the whole thing that i'm trying to show u is that when two ppl talk to each other and the one person is done saying something than it is the end of the paragraph. Plz don't dislike me for anything that i said i'm just trying to help is all and well hope that u update soon but take ur tie and good luck with ur school work.^_^ bye
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Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 18:49 CST
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Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: November 09, 2004 08:10 CST
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Take as long as you need, I'll still be here to review. I may be the only one saying this but, 'Remember school is more important then writing fan fiction.' Anyway . . . . loved the chapter, nice Seto is cute. It looks like they will be accepted seeing as Anzu is now out of the group, Honda already knows and Yami just needs to tell Yugi his feeling. . .Maybe at the same time Jou tells them about Seto? Might make it easier for them both. Till next chapter!
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Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 18:32 CST
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Title: ch7
Reviewed By: Kitsune Spyk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 18:10 CST
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yeah go yami. nice anzu bashing someone needed to put her in her place. i loved it. i really liked seto nice. i hope everyone excepts him and joey as a couple. im going to cry if they dont. please keep updating. and do it soon as well please.
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Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 16:39 CST
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>< Gay computer!!!
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Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 08:50 CST
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I love yami, the way you wrote his coldness towards Anzu as he dumped her. Great! *is now an offical addict to this story* Thanks for writting this story. I'm enjoying it greatly.
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Reviewed By: KuraBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOO I LOVE THIS! PLEASE PLEASE Update this as soon as possible! I cant wait till Bakura comes back into the story^^
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Title: Please Continue
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 23:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue can't wait till next chapter.
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