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Title: DAMN COMPUTER
Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 02:28 CDT
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In order to view your comments I am having to review my own frikin story afetr every one you ppl send to me, its so stupid!
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Title: *Laughs sheepishly as she puts her hand behind her head.*
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(still logged out) On: August 17, 2004 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm pure bred for writing, I get it from both sides of my family. Also I've been wandering this site since mid June and have read similar stories to this. That's why I was able to guess what was to come, but I like how you put your own spin on it. And I'm glad I was able to give you ideas, but the blood soaked Yami actually came from 2 fics on this site. They are 'Anything Is Possible' by Sumomo and 'Razor Wire Shrine' by Edmondia Dantes. Both are worth a read as they're short and can give you a better idea of what I was getting at. Anyway, I loved the Jou/Seto scene, oh please do more like that. The Ryou/? [I'm thinking it's Bakura, again it's due to too much reading] part is interesting and I think it's going to be fun too. Ah foreshadowing, soon Yugi will regret leaving class when he did. Probably what I like most about this fic is that you remembered how much Yugi's life sucked before he solved the puzzle and how it didn't get wildly better after he solved it. So I have added you to my favorites to keep up with this fic, and you have inspired me to hand out mystery boxes that contain random bishounen plushies [of the authoress' choosing] to the authoress in my reviews as incentive for them to keep writing. So here, have a mystery box, along with matching Yugi and Yami plushies with several sets of clothes, one of Yami's being blood soaked, and a little never-ending tube of fake blood that's easy to wash out and doesn't stain.
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Title: screwing up again>.
Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 18:07 CDT
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Title: SQUEEEEE!
Reviewed By: tuki_mutou (not logged in) On: August 16, 2004 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chappie was perfect! I have been waiting for you to update for so long now! yay! I just love this story! and blood covered Yami is S-E-X-Y! >D Anzu is really starting to get on my nerves! *whacks Anzu on the head with a hammer* she is soo gross! O__O anyways, update! you can't just leave poor Yami all alone with Yugi mad at him!
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Title: Stupid thing is screwing up
Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 02:36 CDT
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotten Candy (Not logged in) On: August 15, 2004 22:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Noooooooooooooooooooo, Yuuuuuuuuuuuuuugiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
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Reviewed By: ????? On: July 24, 2004 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was awesome! Yug and Yami are my favorite but I also love Joey and Seto too!And Seto is an exotic dancer!? Oooo I love it, please please update this story its ver good so far^^ Ja ne! Just testing something out
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Reviewed By: Evan2048 On: July 24, 2004 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the story very much though enjoyment does have it's limits and errors with the sex-ed females experience more pleasure that the males do, a common error considering the pain women go through with their first time. the inside gives you more pleasure than the outsibe.
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Reviewed By: you know who^^ On: July 24, 2004 02:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome fic! I hope you keep this going, yugi x yami 4ever!
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Title: One of ur best friends DUH
Reviewed By: Shadow_Writer On: July 24, 2004 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story u have to finish it! Ryou: Please Don't let BAkura BEat me AGAIN Bakura: SHUT UP LITTLE BITCH You know I love ur fics so PLEASSSE IF I ever needed anything it was for u to post the next Chapter!
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Reviewed By: Me On: July 23, 2004 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work
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Title: Ryou/Bakura's Murderer
Reviewed By: Shadow_Writer On: July 23, 2004 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story I look forward to reading the next chapter thats already up and hope to see many more for our (the readers) reading pleasure. great job don't stop writing you are so creative
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! this is sooo amazing!!! i luve y/yy their soo kawaii!!!! update soon!!!
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Title: :P
Reviewed By: lDragen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think when Bakura abuses Ryou it is just soooo cute!*cheers* Continue your story, I don't have any pointers to give because you did a excellent job!Love,Ashtin!
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Reviewed By: Tuki_Mutou ( not signed in) On: July 19, 2004 08:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! update! I love this story! The health class part was hillarious!! X3 poor Yugi... ;_; his virgin ears! anyways update! I really wanna know what that meanie Anzu wants!...(though I think I might have a faint idea...) X__x
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