| "Through your Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Reviewed By: Henio [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was GREAT!!!!!! It was the best sex scene i've ever read. I loved it. plzzz post the epiloge soon here and at ff.net.
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Reviewed By: Ryui and Gokuruchan On: July 23, 2004 11:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it I so wish there was more but I guess thats in the trash -throws her wish in the trash can- well I loved the story I'll be reading another one of your soon
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Reviewed By: Keahi On: July 23, 2004 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh I loved this chapter :) i can't believe this was your first NC-17, hurry up with the last chapter :)
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 27 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 09:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 26 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 25 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 09:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 24 it was great.
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Reviewed By: unspoiledrinil On: July 23, 2004 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a totally awsome chapter. usagi is a lucky lucky girl. all that i can say is wow. i am so looking foward you ur next chapter. ja ne for now.
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Reviewed By: LunarPrincess On: July 23, 2004 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well.... i think you have some explaining to do... How in the world could this have been your first NC17?? there is no fricken way. that was... wow... Its all i can say... and like Serenity said... they didn't even make it to the bed! The only thing i didn't like, was that you switched between names. Usagi and Serenity. everything else was great. Cant wait to read the epolouge...(spelled that wrong... oh well). LP
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Reviewed By: Ivy Tearen On: July 23, 2004 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it, the ruff languege got to me a little bit. but thats ok, I really love this story and can't wait to read the end. This is the type of story you can read over and over again and never really get bored.
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Title: Ohhhhhhhhh My God!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: blue_straberry [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was I'm speechles!!! Like I have told you I love this FIC. You are a great writer, so keep on going. Oh and yes you must do an epilog
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 23 it was great. Maybe you make a DVD of this fic and send a free copy to your loyal reviewers.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 22 it was great.
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Reviewed By: Cristina On: July 21, 2004 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okayy people......I want to say something... THAT WAS SOOOOOO SUGOIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!BUNZAIIIIII!! oKAY UP DATE SOON SOON
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Reviewed By: Ivy Tearen On: July 21, 2004 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
love your fanfic And can't wait till you finish it, its so great I can read it over and over again. That is the sighn of a truely great writer
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