| "Kikyo's Haunted House" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Title: mad>_
Reviewed By: Yellowchild1/2 On: January 10, 2005 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
animegrl13 I am so mad! You never write anymore stories. You are my favorite writer!*cries*;_; you have to write the next chapter........
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha=antidrug On: January 10, 2005 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think ur story was great but the songs.........? They sound too old skool.....ya know? the writing was great Just the songs it just ruined everything.......... I am sooooooooooooooooooo sry I had to say that.*cries*But ur story still rocked. I will hold my breath until you write the next chapter. Don't let me die!I can only last about an hour or two....................Or not....takes final breath *dies*
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Reviewed By: n/o On: November 24, 2004 17:50 CST
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ur stories r still too short! Fix that problem and start updating be4 i turn into hulk and buy a new shirt everytime.
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Title: COOL!!!!
Reviewed By: Sanko-chan (Sango1on1) On: September 02, 2004 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
me: COOL! Inu: You make me look like a baka for not being about to choose Kikyo or Kagome! All IY Cast: YOU ARE A BAKA!!!! Inu: Oh...hehehe Me: MORE MORE MORE!!!! It's so cool! Kag: Update soon... I guess... Kik: I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT- Me: *Kills Kikyo*(Sorry always hated her) Inu: Now I can choose! KAGOME, LETS GET HITCHED! Every one minus Inuyasha: O.o Me: Uh................Cool story!
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Reviewed By: Inu_RebelBabe07 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 22:24 CDT
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That was interesting. You need to keep writing soon cuz I want to find out what happens. I want Koga to go first then Sango and Miroku and then Kagome and Inuyasha. best for last eh? But keep up the great work and keep writing cuz i cant wait to see what is gonna happen.
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Reviewed By: A-PERSON On: August 12, 2004 19:04 CDT
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MIROKU'S FIRST!!!! TORTURE THE PERVERT!!!
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: Yellowchild1/2 On: July 29, 2004 18:52 CDT
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Hey,read ur story.I liked it. Please don't add any of the 1968 remixes,but I gotta hand it to ya, ya did great.Can't wait for the next chapter. This is the best story I've read so far,keep the good work.
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Reviewed By: fe-fe ^-* On: July 28, 2004 00:44 CDT
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Not to be rude or anything, but, I don't think Kikyo should sing in this FANFIC! It's DORKY and NOT funny. It's NOT cool, not cool at all! >:( No affence! AND THERE"S NO ACTION IN THIS STORY YET! I'm still waiting! Yup , No action at all! I don't think it's good!!!!! Well Here's another tip for you! Write Your Story longer! And whats with the complicated words! I don't understand a thing. And I don't bother looking in the dictionary everytime I see one. Well thats all! Oh And It's also Boring! * SNORING OUT LOUD DURING THE STORY *
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Title: YOUR COOL!!!!!
Reviewed By: Souta's sis On: July 28, 2004 00:34 CDT
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Hey! I like your story!!! I would like to request a song! Would Kikyo torture the group with a song called..... Well .. I don't know what it's called but It fits perfectly with the cast! It goes a little something like this.." I'm still in love with you boy"..Yeah well I'm not that good at remembering title songs but if Kikyo would torture Inuyasha with this song It would be GREAT!!!! and thank you! Your story is Great! Please R&R ( Write the next chapter longer if you would . Thank You! ^_~)
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Reviewed By: Miriam+mimi On: July 23, 2004 22:59 CDT
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And no m&m's!!!!!!!
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Title: Nice storie
Reviewed By: Jordon On: July 11, 2004 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really like ur story so far; I've read a lot of stories, but this one is quite creative with the haunted house, I also print them off, but not now I'm @ my dads; neways Keep up the awsome writing!
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Reviewed By: Sango#1 On: July 11, 2004 00:16 CDT
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Will u also write anymore fanfics?!
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Reviewed By: Miriam/ mimi On: July 11, 2004 00:05 CDT
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Hey, This is Mi-mi!!!!!!! Luv our story!! Can't wait to see what chapter 2's about!!It'll be gr8t. Bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Souta's sis On: July 10, 2004 23:52 CDT
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Hey!! It's me, hamburger!! I like how your story is turning out so far!! I had to read it more than once because it was so great!!! I did'nt even know you wrote your own fanfic until mimi told fluffy and I! ^_~ I had a fun time reading it and reviewing your story! Well......I have to know what happens next! You're right!!!This story is full of suspense!!!Have a great time writing and don't forget to post up a NEW CHAPPY K? QUICKLY!!!! Bye, Bye Now.
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Reviewed By: Priscila/animeaddict On: July 10, 2004 23:15 CDT
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Hey Teddy's Sis..I-I mean Allison! Nice story so far...longer chaps might be better, but since it's your story oh well. When i read the info on your story, it sort of reminded me of "MY" fanfic that has NOT yet been posted. Mimi already told you about my story. It's ok..just don't add Vampires, murder scenes, The Others, a song by white Stripes, and violence. Thank You! animeaddict,hamburger,and mimi
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