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Title: question marks makes reading hard!
Reviewed By: tiger_gurl On: September 30, 2004 02:16 CDT
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I tried to enjoy the new chapter but what's with all the questions marks everywhere are is it just me? Well I'm gald you updated.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 00:35 CDT
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excellent plot and description. intresting how naruku can reach her in her dreams. scary too. damn, hate to be her right now. good job and i can't wait to read where this goes.
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Reviewed By: inuyashaslave [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 20:31 CDT
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really good dont stop i want to know what happens next. will sesshomaru let her go or will naraku get her back? i want to find out!!
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you continue again sooner than this. I like this story, and I hope Sesshoumaru realizes that he can heal her scars with the Tensaiga, since its a healing sword, I'd hate to have that many scars, reminding always of a weakness. Oi, that wouldn't be fun. See! You got me into the story line you evil, evil person! How dare you, god, not cool. Stories cool, but not cool that I got so into this wonderful story! Oh do continue and soon?
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: yumemriu(Amanda) On: September 03, 2004 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kick-ass story...cant wait to read more ^.~
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Reviewed By: p On: September 03, 2004 02:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey great story please up[date it i love sess/kag
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Reviewed By: Tsuki Yume On: September 02, 2004 19:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I thought he would act a little harsher. Not that I mind.
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Reviewed By: the_care_bear_hater On: August 29, 2004 23:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Y ARENT U UPDATING!!!!!!!!!!!!!IM GUNNA STOP READING...actually i wouldnt really...i'll just keep complaining:P so update please
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Reviewed By: kitty kitsune On: August 16, 2004 20:57 CDT
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i luv this story it close to winter hearts but yet so diffrent heh it great either way all well off to read youre other stories bye i'll be back
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Reviewed By: Tsuki Yume On: August 05, 2004 20:54 CDT
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mI suppose the darker the beginning the the more brilliantly lit the end applies to this. At least, I hope it does.Poor little sweetheart.
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Reviewed By: RayGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 17:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
its so sad! im sorry i couldnt read past the first chapter...
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Title: OMG!!!!
Reviewed By: amyfushigiyugii On: August 05, 2004 08:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now that was wild!!!!!!!! and i want more of it!!!!! ::stalks the author of such a hot story::
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Title: good story
Reviewed By: Fire_star_mistress85 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn. Poor Kagome this was really good. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Title: Good story
Reviewed By: tiger_gurl On: August 01, 2004 03:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOA poor Kagome and all the other who think she's dead. I hope you update real soon.
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Reviewed By: cadberryEgg On: July 26, 2004 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just
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