| "Shuichi's Bored Writings" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: youkai neko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hi people know me as DemonsKid on fanfiction.net i read ur fan fic there and was upset that u where leveing ff.net. i hope u continue ur fan fic here it is really good
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Reviewed By: Shoko(Child of Ice) On: August 07, 2004 23:37 CDT
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Well THAT chapter wasn't TERRIBLY interesting, but at leest I now know that they have an awsome house! And YAY! Tohma didn't turn into an ass!! I'm so happy*teary smile* Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Fireangel3571 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I love this story, I am so into it. By the way, Happy Birthday. Oh and one other thing I wanna say, thank you for showing the sweet side of Eiri. NOt a lot of fanfiction's do that and well, I really appriciate it. Thank you so much for that =D Oh and Happy Birthday once again! =D
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Title: I ADORE your fanfic!!!
Reviewed By: Child of Ice [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 02:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NUUU!!! We don't need any TohmaXRyuichi stuffs! It was bad enough when Suguru forgived Hiro so quickly for going off to CHEET ON HIM!!! But aside from that complain I really do love your ficcy^.^ There are a few grammer mess ups here and there but it IS really well written and I like the plot! I don't see Ayaka as THAT much of a bitch, but that's ok... I read enough Gundam fanfics that I'm used to that kinda stuff. Plus who knows what she's done, I'm only a book five^.^;; Keep up the good work! You should never officially end this, if ever you get an idea you should just start up yet another chapter^.^ byebye for now!!!
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Reviewed By: KissEternal [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 01:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh Yeah!!!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Lucky 3
Reviewed By: KissEternal [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YATTA!!!!!!!!! You know you love my reviews. 3 already. My lucky number. KEEP IT GOING!!!!!!! This is soooo great. I actually got excited when I saw the new chap. Hehehehe. I wasn't disappointed at all. Keep it up! and update!!! If ya do, I'll give you Pocky *holds up Pocky*, and if you don't like Pocky i have LOTS of other candies!!!!! And if you're a weirdo who doesn't like candy, I have..........salad? Hahahahaha.... The world is made of: Love, Peace, and Pocky!!!!!!!!!! JA NE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yuikey On: July 25, 2004 04:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great!!!!!!
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Title: *Wide eyed*
Reviewed By: YaoiFangirl15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That...was...so...good! ^_^ Pweeeeease continue soon. *must contain herself* Can't wait too long! Hope you update REAL soon ^_^
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Title: Really Good Job!!!
Reviewed By: SaiyanzAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! You have to continue. This is such a great fic!! *can't hold her enjoyment in* I'll be waiting for your future chapters. You HAVE to continue soon!!!!!!!! lol.
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Title: Eeee!
Reviewed By: Alastair(not logged in) On: July 22, 2004 17:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aw! You blushed! So cute! *pinches your cheeks* Ahem, anyway, I should probably stop that. Sounding a bit stalkerish . . . that is now a word. Anyway, this is still adorable. ^^;;; Ne, maybe you can find someone for our dear Ryuuichi since you don't know what to do with him? . . . ^^Maybe Kuma?
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Reviewed By: KissEternal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YATTA!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hiya!!!!!!!!!!! Me again. I reviewed TWICE. I RULE!!!!!!!! Great story!!!! Keep it up and for God's sake UPDATE!!!!!!!!! Hehehehehehe!!!!!!!! *secretly plotting to steal bean bag chair* Expect to get another review as you update cuz I like it and I'm bored. Love, Peace, and Pocky!!!!!!!!! JA NE!!!!!!!!
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Title: Fic Reader
Reviewed By: EdTheSpecial [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo! Took you long enough... Okay, fine, 3 days isn't that bad. I liked it, although I did notice quite a few grammar mistakes. I'm almost always at my computer or on the other side of the room sleeping, so if you want me to proofread a chapter, I really wouldn't mind reading the chapters early.^^ Anyway... I give this fic a great/10. Can't wait to see what happens with Yuki and Shu's wedding later. Is that even legal by Japanese law? Hm...
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Ice [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 07:42 CDT
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ok this is a great story keep it up i love Gravitation and the fact its shonen ai. i love it. it took a while for me to read it but its really good. if you get the chance read mine its called Koorime's Love its Yu Yu Hakusok so like i said good work and i loved the one about Ireland. im not sure i spelled that right sorry. its good keep it going and might i ask how old are you?
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Title: *wants to rape you in your bean bag chair*
Reviewed By: Alastair(not logged in) On: July 16, 2004 04:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^ *squeals* Ryuuichi! . . . anyway, the title of this review was the first thing I thought when I read your author's note at the end of your first chapter. *shrugs* I don't know, you sounded completely adorable, and I guess that you still do. ^^But wow! I'm so glad that I didn't just look for YYH fics! I should look for the most recently updated fics more often, ne? This was positively adorable! Keep it up, please!
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Reviewed By: KissEternal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YATTA!!!!!!!!! That was great....hehehehehehe....please finish it......PLEEZE!!!!!!!! Now you can't say you won't cuz you don't have a review cuz now ya DO!!! hehehehehehe......mayby this will encourage more reviews...YATTA! setting trends! But seriously it's very good...heheh way better than my crappy story.......Keep it up!!!!! And don't be afraid to drop me a line....i'm a lil' starved for human contact hehehehe..... YATTA!!! Love,Peace, and Pocky!!!!! Ja Ne!!!
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