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Title: Lady Raven
Reviewed By: Lady Raven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was alright. i can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: ScentOfLavander [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 18:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey. i definitely think this should be a Hiei/Kagome pairing. it just seems strangely right for this fic. I suppose in a way, she would get more SYMPATHY from Kurama, but i also think that by being with Hiei, he will somehow show her a way to grow stronger because of the unfortunate things that happened to her. and i think that everyone will agree with me (yes, even the kurama/kagome fans) that no one wants kagome to be weak in front of her father in the final confrontation (if there is one, there might not be, im guessing)i think Hiei would be better for her in this fic in the sense that she could make herself stronger through him. (am i repeating myself?) anyhoo, thats my 10 cents. Hiei: *smirk* that, and the fact that you just like me better... Me:SHHHHH! they dont know that! well, update and soon!! ~~~aliya
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Reviewed By: silvertigerlil On: October 15, 2004 03:45 CDT
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This chapter and the others rock! I love it and hope to read more soon! I think it would be cool to have uh.. whats her name, the other hanyou paired up with Inu or Kurama..I not sure which one would be better though.
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Reviewed By: tinak142 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 20:41 CDT
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lemmy guess, some of her physical features are going to change, like say black doggy ears, claws and fangs, not to mention can transform into any kind of dog at will, and poisen attacks, and keeping her miko powers, plus garding the Shikon No Tama, but where is Shippou, and Kirara.
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Reviewed By: Dark Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 19:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
very good please update soon =^-^= *meow*
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I WANT TO KILL NARAKU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great story, BAD NARAKU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I vote for Hiei/Kagome!!!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story!! please update soon!! I vote for Hiei/Kagome Hiei/Kagome Hiei/Kagome Hiei/Kagome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: vote
Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is another vote for kag hiei, my next to favorite couple,oh yeah youre doing great with the story so far, keep it up
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Reviewed By: foxylilraven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 15:08 CDT
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kurama/sheori sounds really cute and um, isnt Koroone(sp) half Bat youkai and half Kitsune? if he is i smell a recarnartion. but how bout sence Inuyasha HATES his brother and Shizeru has Sesshy's Personality(only a little more free with her emotions((only cause she is human and a woman))) it wont really work, but how bout Inu/Boton or Inu/Yukina
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Reviewed By: kagsessdaughter Silver [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 17:22 CDT
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meeeeeeeeeee love ittttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please keep going and could ya tell me hwne you put up a new chappy please
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Reviewed By: kagsessdaughter Silver [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 17:15 CDT
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this is very good so far but let me read the next chappy first
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Reviewed By: Beachbunny229 On: September 22, 2004 18:48 CDT
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i love it it is absoutly perfict now all you need to do is update!
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Reviewed By: rain-chan On: September 18, 2004 20:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
hiei/kagome please
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 18:27 CDT
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Oh, it saddened me a bit that Kagome won't be with Inu Yasha! (I don't know, they just belongs together for me, but whatever) well, it doesn't mean the other pairings aren't good! And I have to admit that I hesitated between Kagome/Kurama or Kagome/Hiei ... I vote with Hiei!! Hum, wait, wait... no Kurama! ... Rah, don't bother about me, both is good! (euh I don't say to make both of them with Kagome lol) anyway, for Inu Yasha... it would be OC I guess. Anyway, update soon, and by the way, I like your story so far ;)
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