| "That's Just The Way It Is" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: August 03, 2004 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ouuuuuuuu! Great chapter. Loved the scheming Kagome and tricky Kagome and the "Seducing" of Kouga, hehe. And Oh well, I don't mind that he got killed off right a way. Too bad, so sad. Life will go on, but not for Kouga, haha. I must be in an insensative mood right now. It's something different and change can be a good thing. Are Inuyasha and Kagome going to be friendly with one another any time soon? I hope so, hehe. *wink wink* Well once again, great chapter! Loved it! *goes into song* I love the mafia story, yes I do, yes I do! And you do too, or else you're poo. Now this song is through..... Sorry about that Can't wait for more! --Autumn
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Reviewed By: deena151 On: August 03, 2004 19:39 CDT
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hey i really like this story can't wait until you update again. I hope that is soon
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: July 25, 2004 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yey! You updated! This makes Autumn happy! hehehe. I loved this chapter as much as the previous. Ut-o, where did Kagome go? Love the action packed scenes, the funny scenes, hell.. Loved every scene :P Well sorry this review isn't that long and not really funny but I haven't had sleep since Friday, lol. Had too much fun this weekend and didn't want to miss anything. ITS TIME FOR BED! So next time will be better, I PROMISE! Keep up the amazing work! --Autumn
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Reviewed By: Hanyou Lover On: July 25, 2004 21:33 CDT
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How can I say this? I ABSOLUTLY LOVE it MORE THAN ANYTHING!!! Oh! and you better not end it anytime soon or I might have to knock some sense into you! *laughs* Great work and keep writting!
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Reviewed By: Hanyou Lover On: July 25, 2004 21:29 CDT
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How can I say this? I ABSOLUTLY LOVE it MORE THAN ANYTHING!!! Oh! and you better not end it anytime soon or I might have to knock some sense into you! *laughs* Great work and keep writting!
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Reviewed By: Swan On: July 24, 2004 19:58 CDT
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hey..keep up the good work..u doing great hope to read more soon... keep it up...
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Reviewed By: deena151 On: July 22, 2004 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is a really great story so far can't wait until you update which i hope is soon! I want to find out what happens between inu and kag.
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Reviewed By: deena151 On: July 22, 2004 04:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is a really great story so far. So inuyasha and kag like eachother but inuyasha plays it off like he doesn't because of his job right? and kagome's father knows the whole story bout them liking eachother? well this is very interesting can't wait until you update which i hope is soon
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Title: !!!!!DUDE!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Encana On: July 18, 2004 10:30 CDT
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I absolutly LOVE your story! It is perfect! It has the right amount of humor with the right amount of seriose-ness. I LOVE IT! Please update soon! I am dieing to hear more!
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: 'karu On: July 18, 2004 02:33 CDT
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so friggen cool man. the whole drug thingeh is a different approach, and its working out awesomely!! Can't wait for more!!! up date soon puh-leeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez!!
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Title: Part 2: read review by me below before this-- then things might make sense! hehe
Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 23:42 CDT
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I mean seriously! I say fuck all the time-there really isn't another word that can express quite the same thing so.. blaaaaaaaahmaaaa ppffft shhh, to that person.. (Oh look, I'e made an enemy. *grins* oops) So I say: this is your story, so use all the god damn creative freedom that you are allowed! Enough of my ranting. Bottom line : I LOVE THIS STORY! poof-- onto the favorites list this goes.
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Title: I fucking love it!
Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Simply wow! This story is so amazingly good! I cannot express how much I truely love it! hehe. Praise is good, no? First off, naturally, I love anything Mafia/Mob/Drug Lord related, te he he. When mixed with Inuyasha it's even better! Damn is it just me or does Inuyasha being Kag's father make him even hotter? haha Gotta love that thick tension going on between Inuyasha and Kagome; I just can't wait to see them act on their emotions. And wow, your words. They are truely amazing! Every thing is perfectly described, not too much, not too little, it creates a vivid picture in my mind and it's like a movie really, playing out as I read it. Especially the part at Starbucks where Kagome ran into Sesshoumaru. (hehehe, too bad there wasn't a band following Kagome around going 'Kagome, Kagome Kagome Kagome!' to the eye of the tiger song...hehehehehehe) ((Sorry, just had to mention my all-time favorite commercial!!!)) And the whole dream/not a dream.. that had me going too! hehe. I reaaaaaaally reaaaaaaally want to read more; RIGHT NOW! *settles down* sorry, I'm just used to getting things when I want them, when ever I want them. Patience is not a virtue here folks. This story is so original and so sinfully good that I just cannot wait. Please, I beg of you: update soon and make more chapters! And oh yea, I disagree with the reviewer below me.. your grammar was fine and seriously.. there really aren't many replacements for shit, damn, fuck, ass, and so on. You get the idea. I mean |
Reviewed By: Phoenix_of_the_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 01:29 CDT
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ummm...needs some improvement on grammer, but its pretty good. but try not use the same word over and over like, swear words (ass,shit), some ppl get tired of that quickly and stop reading if thats all there is in the fic. keep writing and updating. this is not a flame or anything.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: rainegoddes8 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 13:41 CDT
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I like it so far. man i really want to know if was a dream or if it was real. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: killthetoaddemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 20:18 CDT
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I like it; it's actually rather interesting. GAH! I wanna know if it's a dream or not PLEASE UPDATE!
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