| "Melting a heart of ice" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: shymiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 18:53 CDT
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OMG I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Please update soon ^.^ Shy
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_kitsune_tears (curse the comp.) On: July 28, 2004 17:33 CDT
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Sorry i have not reviewed. Great chappie!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope you update soon!!^__^
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Title: By the way...
Reviewed By: bubblesbb03 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 00:05 CDT
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My email is bubblesbb03@yahoo.com if you want to contact me on the beta-ing. Toodles!
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Title: Review!
Reviewed By: Abby (bubblesbb03 On: July 22, 2004 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god I love this story! I have been looking for a really good Sesshoumaru/Kagome story for about two weeks now. Can't seem to find more than I already have...But then, your's came along! It is such a good story. The only thing was that there were a few grammar mistakes here and there, but other than that, it had perfect grammar. (I'm a grammar nazi XD) I enjoyed it a lot. It has a good romance. It's not one of those 'Oh Sesshy, ravish me now, even though I have known you and loved you for FIVE minutes'. I hate those. :P Yup, yours is good and believable. ^_^ I give you a double thumbs up and hope that would update really, really soon. I'm all for your story! -Bubbles PS: If you don't have anyone to beta your stuff yet, I would be willing to do it. Like I said, I'm a grammar nazi!
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Title: : )
Reviewed By: HuNnybabee_8o8 On: July 20, 2004 05:06 CDT
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I'm luvin this story!! it keeps gettin better and better!!! keep up the GREAT work!!(smiles)!!:)
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Reviewed By: shymiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 03:24 CDT
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I love your story please update soon ^.^ Shy
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: July 18, 2004 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hehehe,YEY for 'moments'! Another great chapter, congrats! What will happen next? Dun DUn DUN! who knows... (well you of coures =P) Keep up the great work and update sooon pleeeeeeeeease! --Aitu
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Title: : )
Reviewed By: HuNnybabee_8o8 On: July 17, 2004 04:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story rocks!!! it is so interesting and i luv it!!!! i can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter!! keep up the good work!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: July 16, 2004 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yey! What a great present to wake up to: two more chapters to read, hehe. Six languages? That's really impressive! I wish that I could speak fluently in every language in which I have been taught to sing. It's just not the same, you can sing the words and know what they mean but still not know how to use them in regular language... Enough on that. I really enjoyed the two chapters that were added! Is Sesshoumaru started to have a little change of heart? Awww, so cute. I hope that there's more moments of cuteness between the two (Him and Kagome) I cannot wait to read more! Make more chapters soon please. Your fan, Aitu
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_kitsune_tears (damn comp. wont let me sign in!) On: July 16, 2004 12:23 CDT
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Im glad you updated! But still, PLZ update really really really soon!!!!!!^__~
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Reviewed By: Qtkitty2000 On: July 14, 2004 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fanfic so far please update it soon! you are very cerative and the story is very origonal.
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is a really good story! And you are just learning english? Damn.. If that is true then it is sad when one looks at other people who are native speakers of English because they have less skill with the language considering they have been learning it their whole lives. You're doing a good job in that department so no worrys! Anywho, I really like your story. The story line is great, as is the plot. I love the character and their interactions as well.hehehe. So will Inuyasha take a liking to Kagome as well, or will he like Kikyo, or maybe none of the above? (I'm always full of questions)You have a great start to your story and I bet that it will get better and better! Keep up the good work and I hope to read more from you soon! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 12:53 CDT
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Your welcome. anyway, plz update really soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 15:45 CDT
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well, i didn't think it would be that short to update, but whos complaining!!! update when you feel like it, but i hope its soon!!!!!!!!!^________^
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_kitsune_tears (not signed in) On: July 12, 2004 12:39 CDT
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Update plz!!! this is a good story so plz UPDATE!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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