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Reviewed By: Bahamian Royalty On: June 20, 2005 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it i cant wait to read the second one. ill start now
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Reviewed By: breal_blood_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! really good writing! hope u update soon. i'm lookin forward to readin more of ur stories. bye bye breal_blood_demon
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 18:54 CDT
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I cried. I don't know why I didn't get my auto notify but I'm glad I went looking today. *sniffle* The summary is much better with the little snippet. It worked for me as well. I added the snippet and my hits doubled. Which to me was more important than the reviews. This is a great story and I'll keep an eye out for the sequel. Thank you for writing. -El-
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Title: To Hell Together
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 13, 2004 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh sorry that it' over.can't wait to read more of the new one... maria
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Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Coolk glad to hear you are doing a sequill I realy like this one so looking foward to the next one.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: madame shannon On: August 10, 2004 19:15 CDT
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comming from a person who has loved db, dbz, and dbz and has been watching them since she was 12 yrs old (22 now) this is a most excellent story that is just begging to be told!! plz review soon!! here, you deserve a rose @---^--
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Title: To Hell Together
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 02, 2004 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
vegeta is such an ass you know this right...always playing with people.good i'm glad that happen to him..poor goku...until next chaper. update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Poor Vegeta, I hope the two can sort out thier feelings. Goku shoudn't have left now what will happen toi the prince will Goku even care? Up-Date soon Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 15:08 CDT
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I'm pleasantly suprised. This was a lot better than I thought it was going to be. No offense but your summary is only soso. I really like the descriptions you have. The conversations are wonderful. I'm looking forward to seeing how this continues. Thank You for writing this -El-
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Title: To Hell Together
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 01, 2004 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one i'm not offended. two i know that it's your magination, and it a story.i'm just giving you feed back thats all.and asking some questions. so chichi had a lover.i would had always thought it would have been yamcha??? oh well. and vegta is jealous. so i'll wait for the rest...maria
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Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You are doinbg realy well. Up-date soon K? Nice to know ChiChi is not the bad one this time. Maybe get Goku to calm are little hot head down. well gota go Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: ladykatt [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, I can not wait it is driving me crazy. Please up-date soon. ChiChi is going to upset Goku isn't she? good it is holding me entraced. Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Title: To Break Ones Heart
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 30, 2004 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
to give you and answer.i do understand this story.for one he was with chichi know he has feelings for vegeta.and i can't say F...her because she IS HIS WIFE for one and has his kids...i know that people fall out of love all the time.i'm just looking at the BIG picture with ALL involved...so update soon for the anwers...maria
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Title: WOW!!!!!
Reviewed By: Princess Karteena (LadyKATT) On: July 29, 2004 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!! Is Vegeta going to make the first move or torment Goku till he dose something to him? up-date soon PLEASE!!!! Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 15:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!
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