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Reviewed By: Anime_FanGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 17:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's great so far! I love it! Please update!
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Title: Nice Job
Reviewed By: auramoonsare On: July 25, 2004 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work Writer!!! keep updating it!!!! don't stop working!!!! ^_^!
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Reviewed By: dark_fire_demon19 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a kewl fan fic, i luv it!! ^^ two things 1.) MY FRIEND HAS THAT SAME SHIRT...except it says 'one by one the pengiunes are stealing my sanity" 2.) Genki is spelled Genkai sry 4 correcting u but....IM JUST SRY OK!?!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: Anime_FanGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 10:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's good so far! Update! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Rey Yukimora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 03:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey love your story so far! please update! and i totally agree with you on the part that you want to know the truth about how people think about your ff. some people don't want flames, thus they wont be able to fix the problems they have i their story. thank you for understanding the importance of flames...unlike some imature readers...sorry about that, but i got an email from some angry reviewer that you shouldn't flame the ff, and i guess she just didn't understand the importance of flames...well, i just love the story so far and i don't mind if it's short. you made it short for a reason and i think people should respect that.
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Reviewed By: Tessa On: July 13, 2004 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The style of writing was a little shaky but since this was only a short introduction to the story (establishing character's personality and basic plot of the story)It's understandable, but some of the phrasing in the writing seems a bit amateur but can be perfected with experience. The spelling had minor errors but the grammar was near perfect. I have seen this type of character before but on few occasions and there were a few holes in the overall personality but since this is a very short intoduction to the story and character development wasn't quite able to develop i'll discredit that for now. Very entertaining, leaves on a classic dramtic cliffhanger and the character seems to fit into it perfectly, being somewhat moody she could react in a number of ways to the situation. Overall rating is a 8.5/10, small holes here and there but a wealth of potential. T$
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Reviewed By: kero8950 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 22:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
was kinda short, but seems interesting. update soon please
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Reviewed By: TeshiKeiKenda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 20:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
^_^ That was good. Please update soon. *agrees with Anime_Fan girl* It was short, but thats ok!
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Reviewed By: Anime_FanGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 13:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
It seemed short, but it was interesting. Please update.
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