| "What else can go wrong? (insert you)" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Title: PLZ UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: Crazy_Hiei_Fangirl On: September 07, 2004 14:44 CDT
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Me likes ur story a lot! I'm stupeed so I can't answer the question... ^_^;; Well anyways UPDATE A.S.A.P. ^.~
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Reviewed By: Anime_Addicted1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, unless you want to get it booted of the site, you can't call the next story a CYOA. Becuase it's not alowd anymore, and because it's not CYOA. You would have to have two bishies to choose from, there fore, labeling it Choose Your Own Adventure(CYOA) But anyway, I think it should be an Inuyasha fic with Sesshy. Because Sesshy is my baby. PLEASE UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Genkaimaster [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 18:52 CDT
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This is a great story. Keep up the great work.
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Title: *Sigh...* Being busy sucks..............................................
Reviewed By: Izumi Princess Of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Being busy sucks................................. I feel your pain dude............................ anywhoo UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! JA NE!!!!!!! ~Izumi Princess Of Darkness
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Title: What else can go wrong
Reviewed By: Icey Queen10 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I like the story but I HATE the CYOA ones when they speak in japanese and i can't understand them.
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Title: YAY!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Bakarosedragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 20:19 CDT
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YAYAYAYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ME LIKES! ME LIKES LOTS!!!!! Update realllllll soon or else face the wrath of my inard eating telletubies of choas! muhahahahha!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Anime_FanGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 17:53 CDT
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It's great so far! I love it! Please update!
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Title: Nice Job
Reviewed By: auramoonsare On: July 25, 2004 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work Writer!!! keep updating it!!!! don't stop working!!!! ^_^!
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Reviewed By: dark_fire_demon19 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a kewl fan fic, i luv it!! ^^ two things 1.) MY FRIEND HAS THAT SAME SHIRT...except it says 'one by one the pengiunes are stealing my sanity" 2.) Genki is spelled Genkai sry 4 correcting u but....IM JUST SRY OK!?!?!?!?
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Reviewed By: Anime_FanGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 10:19 CDT
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It's good so far! Update! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Rey Yukimora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 03:02 CDT
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hey love your story so far! please update! and i totally agree with you on the part that you want to know the truth about how people think about your ff. some people don't want flames, thus they wont be able to fix the problems they have i their story. thank you for understanding the importance of flames...unlike some imature readers...sorry about that, but i got an email from some angry reviewer that you shouldn't flame the ff, and i guess she just didn't understand the importance of flames...well, i just love the story so far and i don't mind if it's short. you made it short for a reason and i think people should respect that.
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Reviewed By: Tessa On: July 13, 2004 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The style of writing was a little shaky but since this was only a short introduction to the story (establishing character's personality and basic plot of the story)It's understandable, but some of the phrasing in the writing seems a bit amateur but can be perfected with experience. The spelling had minor errors but the grammar was near perfect. I have seen this type of character before but on few occasions and there were a few holes in the overall personality but since this is a very short intoduction to the story and character development wasn't quite able to develop i'll discredit that for now. Very entertaining, leaves on a classic dramtic cliffhanger and the character seems to fit into it perfectly, being somewhat moody she could react in a number of ways to the situation. Overall rating is a 8.5/10, small holes here and there but a wealth of potential. T$
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Reviewed By: kero8950 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 22:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
was kinda short, but seems interesting. update soon please
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Reviewed By: TeshiKeiKenda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 20:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
^_^ That was good. Please update soon. *agrees with Anime_Fan girl* It was short, but thats ok!
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Reviewed By: Anime_FanGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 13:54 CDT
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It seemed short, but it was interesting. Please update.
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