| "Just the Beginning" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 19:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I couldn't read THE KISS chapter..it is in different letterings..please fix it soon.
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Title: kiss
Reviewed By: f On: September 15, 2004 14:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
the kiss chapter is all scrambled...eek!
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Title: Kiama Samoyi
Reviewed By: Kiama Samoyi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey girl this is your chick miaka...lol love the fic....PLEASE UPDATE...I WANA KNOW WHAT IT SAIDS...(crys).....call this one up...love ya much...(smooches...) ^_^
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Reviewed By: shywaii_gurl On: August 09, 2004 23:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh crys... what does it say?
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Title: FIX IT!!!!!!!!!!!11
Reviewed By: TOYOSHI 01X3 On: July 31, 2004 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I CAN READ A CHAPTER (SOB)ITS IN SOME TYPE OF JAPANSES SOMTHING AND I CANT UNDERSTAND IT AND OH NO OH NO THAT'S REALY BAD BUT I STILL LOVE THE FIC PLEASE UPDATE AND FIX (NOW,NOW,NOW!!!!!!!) P.S I STILL LOVE THE STORIE...
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Comment/Review:
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Title: WHY!?!?! NOT FAIR!
Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 23:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Huh?!?! I CAN"T READ IT!!! WHY CAN"T I READ!!!?!??!? It's..like...different letterings...*CRIES*SOBBING* WHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! NOT FAIR! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! I don't know what's wrong...i want to read the next chapter...but i can't ...:(:(:( *sad...*
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooo this is very good and he should kiss her then make monky horny love to her by the moonlight
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Title: *laughing out of control*
Reviewed By: shywaii_gurl On: July 25, 2004 05:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh lol that was so funny please keep updating its funny!!!!!!! HEEHEE
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 19:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Niffy (not logged in) On: July 13, 2004 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uhh...this is the first songfic i read before and I'm just wondering...what's the difference between a songfic and other fics? Uhhhh....By the way this so CUTE! THEY SHOULD! SHOULD!! SHOULD!!! SHOULD!! SHOULD!! YES!!! PLEASEE! PLEASE! And maybe in the future more...n_n Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: chibi-staci [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!! YES!! THEY SHOULD KISS!!!(and more *mischevious grin*) update soon please!! i cant stand the waiting!
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