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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 10:32 CST
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Awwww! Poor Yami and Yugi! Face-off! This duel is gonna tear Yami apart emotionally, I just know it! *weeps* BTW, I don't think Yugi is stupid. Just, as you put it, sheltered. Keep writing, can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 23:38 CST
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Good chappie! I don't think Yugi is really a bad guy or anything, just a little twisted because he's so confused. He's trying to cling to his original belief that Yami is bad, even though he can see the actions of the spirit proving him wrong over and over, causing all the conflicting emotions. He knows that if he accepts that he was wrong, he would never forgive himself for everything he's done, which is why he's so stubbornly clinging to the idea that Yami is bad. I got this right, right? Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Starduster On: November 14, 2004 18:17 CST
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Oh, and I now get that whole business with the Solemn wishes shower from chapter 13
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Reviewed By: Starduster On: November 14, 2004 18:15 CST
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I don't think that your Yugi is horrible and stupid. I think he's just a tad misguided! * I just love the attitudes of the duel monsters when they are talking about their views of their roles in the game.
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Reviewed By: Dark Wind On: November 11, 2004 11:38 CST
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*happily bounces around* It's an update!!! Yay!!*smiles* This was great as usual. I absolutely love this. The characters are great!! (Yugi kind of makes me mad, though.)
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Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: November 10, 2004 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Still liking where this is going. Must keep reading it . . . .
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 16:17 CST
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Love it. Love it.
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Title: Really good.
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 00:15 CST
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Really good Seto seems to be really happy, but is Yugi going to forgive Yami, I hope he does. But I still want Kaiba to be happy with Yami, maybe he can have both hehe.
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Reviewed By: Starduster On: November 09, 2004 14:48 CST
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It's so sweet that Yami decided to try to commit the sight of Yugi to memory. I love that Jou is realising the fact that Yugi is acting weird, and the cunning way he got Yugi to help in the quest to save Seto. I did get somewhat confused by the line "Fortunately, a few seconds one appeared. And another. And another." Was there a typo in there somewhere? What was it supposed to say?
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 09:10 CST
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Awww, kawaii! It was so cute how Yami helped Seto keep an eye on his little brother... Man, this is great! Yugi is only confused because he's being an idiot... I'd like to smack that boy upside the head! Stupidity reigns supreme with him it seems! At least everyone else is gonna help... please update again soon, and thanks for the little note at the end of the chappie! I felt so honored... Ja!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 02:37 CST
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Awsome... I'm still torn about how Yugi is acting towards Yami though... I can understand his reasonings, but his actions are a little extreme... he needs a slap back into reality! I hope they agree to help get Seto back, and at least let the truce flag fly! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: anubiset (to lazy to log in) On: October 29, 2004 21:07 CDT
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Love this, can`t wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Beysie (I don't remember logging out!) On: October 25, 2004 00:31 CDT
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I'm so glad you finally updated! With Yami helping Seto, he'll be out of there in no time, right? He won't get hurt, right? I love my Seto... *puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: saphira_draco [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 04:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its soo cute!
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Title: An Interesting Story . . . .
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 04:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had always wondered what it might have been like if Yugi didn't forgive Yami. I'm sorry I went so long without reading this fic, there really are too few YY/Y/S fics out there. I'm glad to have found another writer who doesn't dislike Tea/Anzu. Now I just need to wait for the next chapter, you will keep writing for this, *Does Yugi/Mokuba/Puppy eyes* right?
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