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| "Whisky Lullaby" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Kirusuchinu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sad ;____;
| Reviewed By: Guttagutta On: July 17, 2004 05:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Way too much of "lalala". You write pretty nicely, but your character comes dangerously close to a MarySue with her angsty past, end and perfect singing voice and so on. Also, for a Saiyuki fic, this doesn't really seem to have anything to do with Saiyuki. Seems more like self-promotion. Also, it's pretty unbelievable that Sanzo-ikkou would be the least bit interested in the singer ( well, maybe Gojyo on horizontal level ). Specially Sanzo.
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