| "The Runaway" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect in every way, you could do a sequel that tells us about Inuyasha's past and how he and Kagome got together... not to mention they're first time together... (I'm a lemon fan, so sue me.) You could name it "Memories of the runaway". Well, that's just a suggestion but it might work! Anyway, this was perfect in every way, great work!
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Reviewed By: Peachy On: July 22, 2004 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SEQULE SEQULE SEQULE SEQULE SEQULE SEQULE SEQULE YOU SHOULD SO MAKE THIS A STORY THE ONE SHOT WAS TOTSLLY AWESOME I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Peachy
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 17:28 CDT
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Kawaii. I thought it was nicely done. But you could if you wanted to, expand on this idea. But hey that is only me. Great job. Keep up the good work.
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Title: best one shot lemon i've read!
Reviewed By: Phantomangel17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 12:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best one shot lemon I have ever read!! It was sooooo good that I wish you would write a story about it so we know what happened in his past and how he meet Kagome and what happened when they got to Japan! anyway people are really stupid on ff.net to have it deleted!!! I love your storys and hope you get everything on ff.net fixed soon!!!
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Title: yahoo!
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 21:00 CDT
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Rin running outa things to say today! YES THE BLABBR MOUTH IS ALMOST SILENT! Do you know how manny fics Rin has reviewed today! Rin's computer has been down for a week now and when Rin checked Rin's mail Rin found like 20 fics were updated! Now Rin has to read and review all that are worthy(meaning all that were updated) Now what was Rin doing? Ah yes, this one rocks! You are one realy talented writer! unlike rin, rins fic totally sucks! but thats ok! rin likes to read other fics! dosnt matter if rin cant write some. Now rin shall continue to read rin's favorite fics! C YA L8ter rin_sama1989@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: VeRoN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 04:24 CDT
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Ok, so....are you going to do more or do we have to beg? It was an awesome lemon... You should keep wirting them so we could have the chance to enjoy an Inu/Kag pair!!! Keep the lemons on!! Did I sound needy?(lol)
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Reviewed By: ani_girl7789 On: July 16, 2004 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic was a really great one... i have but one question... what was inu's past??? im sorry if the question sounds like what an idiot would say, but i wanted to sorta know... other than that, it was really good!!
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Reviewed By: shorty14090 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! I think you should write more one-shots 'cause your really great at it. See ya!
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Reviewed By: whitmangurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome. Good storyline and i love the last line Kagome says. Write more one shots, you're really good at it.
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