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| "...he was crying..." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Yukisuke-ta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You might not do this style of writing that much, some of my friends read this and they quit in the middle cause they got confused and it was hard to read for them...thanks for listening ^_^ byes
| Reviewed By: darkestrose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit, I LOVE that style. It was funny, even if you didn't mean it to be, and I like how you made everything in Yuki's perspective. It did get a little confusing at some times, but, that's to be expected because of the style it's in. It was cute, too. This is an awesome fanfic and you're a great writer! I don't know why you don't get more reviews.. ^^U Everything is 10-10+ and that's saying something, I don't usually rate high.. ^^
| Reviewed By: Runic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the style of this piece, it was an amazing read! It just seemed so unique compared to the usual fare. The story was really interesting, and the presentation of the timeline made it all the more exciting. Hoorah!
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