| "The Breaking of Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zelix (Not logged on) On: August 28, 2004 21:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hoo boy... the plot thickens nicely, hurry.. please...
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Reviewed By: WolfGirl72821 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 20:17 EDT
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Ooooooh UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 ( not logged in ) On: August 28, 2004 13:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute but that ending cliffie is sooo mean
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Reviewed By: ^^ On: August 27, 2004 04:50 EDT
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Great chapter and sweet chapter. update soon.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: August 26, 2004 20:15 EDT
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Excellent chapter. I wonder what happened to Kagome... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Zelix (Not logged on) On: August 26, 2004 14:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this chapter too... where did Kagome go? Hurry with the next one, i'm really interested to know!
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Reviewed By: Crap I forgot to login again ....DAMN IT!!! On: August 26, 2004 14:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story! Keep WRITING!!! Where did Kagome go!?!?!?!?! Did she use the bathroom or something?! I gotta know this things!
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Title: Great Job ^^
Reviewed By: luvbugbub03 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 19:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I thought I reveiwed, but since I read so late at night my stupid but forgot to. ^^ You are a GREAT author, and I personally cannot wait till you update !
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Reviewed By: Damn I forgot to login On: August 22, 2004 02:45 EDT
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Well, just to give you a hint. I reviewed most of your stories. And I want you to update sooner. If you cant quest who I am then.... DAMN I can't think of anything. Oh, well update soon. *mummers curses*
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 20:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 13:58 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, i know what you mean about irregular updates, my own stories are like that... i can't seem to update them regularly no matter how hard i try... anyway, excellent story, good luck with school!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: August 18, 2004 19:24 EDT
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Excellent chapter. Don't worry about the updates, just post when you get time. We'll all still be here! ^_^ Hope the new school year goes well. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: ^^ On: August 18, 2004 16:12 EDT
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Yay! Finally updated. *jumps around* Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 01:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! I think it is moving along perfectly! Not too fast and not too slow. If it moved too fast, it would not be fun, no mystery. I am enjoying your writing and am looking forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: jackie1030 On: August 08, 2004 18:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love stories like this and this is the best i have read as of yet. please dont stop writing i want to know what happens next!!!!
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