| "Kryponite" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: uke, uke ~.~
Reviewed By: Lynzu_Seosima [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2006 04:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
heh, sasuke is uke! naruto very... suggestive XD how could you stop it THERE OMG EVILLLLLL!!! update soon! xoxoxoxoxoxo -Deepest_Darkest_Desires-
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 01:02 CST
Comment/Review:
WAS IT supposed to end there?? oh well that was great but I felt like it needed more...hope you continue this:D THANKS
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Title: -.-
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a total hotty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
niiiiiiiiice. really. real nice. kewl. lol. i love n/s so cute! ^.^
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 21:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Try not to use contractions in the narration.
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Reviewed By: kayoko On: August 14, 2004 00:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
hm.....the chapter stopped in the middle of a lemon scene......or that's what it seems to me... first off, it would be nice if the lyrics are italicized or just separated from the rest of the fic's contents... second, please don't add author's notes in the middle of the chapter....it disturbs the flow of the story...add them at the end! you could even do little omake scenes ^_^ lastly, yay..sasuke's uke XD haha...i want more!!!!!!!! ^_~
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