| "Betrayed by a Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2017 22:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While the grammar and spelling need a little work, it is not enough
to take away the atmosphere of the story that you present. It is
quite good. It seems that you have not updated is quite a long
time. Please consider continuing the story, and finishing it. I
would love to see how things work out.
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Reviewed By: Lady Niona [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 19:52 PDT
Comment/Review:
Please let Kagome save him or her spirit or something to let him know that she didn't mean to leave him behind!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Niona [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 16:00 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
QUESTION...is Kagome going to go back and save Shippo are what?
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 18:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ make the jewel suddenly dissapear.... go to shippo.... and take him to Kagome. A/n can we plz keep Kag ALIVE?!!!!
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 19:57 PDT
Comment/Review:
HUH? very confused, what's real and what's not?
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Title: Betrayed By A Memory
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 12:49 PST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 13:15 PST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 10:15 PST
Comment/Review:
So beautiful. But so so sad.
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Reviewed By: killerkitty1106 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 10:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude please update soon this fic is so cool i cant wait until you update
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Reviewed By: Kuramas Girlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 12:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: YOU MUST!
Reviewed By: Kuramas Girlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 12:31 PST
Comment/Review:
YOU MUST COINTUINE(cant sp..sry)! I LOVE THIS STORY!!
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Reviewed By: Golden_Fire_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 17:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! What is going to happen next? Is Yohko going to go after SHippo? HOw did Yohko know Shippo's name? Will Shippo be in the future and is Kagome really dead? I hope you update really really really really really really soon!
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Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 10:30 PST
Comment/Review:
the first chapter made me almost never want to read again.
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 19:52 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! Talk about intense. All I can say is please update soon. This is one of those stories that just begs to be continued on and I am very curious to see how things go from here. Well I guess till next time, ja ne. ^.~
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Reviewed By: kagayaku rei tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 14:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
i am sobbing because she had to duffer all that crap! poor shippo! Poor kagome! Waaaah!!!!! i luv it, but now i am scared to fall in love!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 21:40 PDT
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hey this is a really great story so far i love it you have to update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: IceYoukaiEnchantress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 03:57 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh......my....f*ckin'......GOD!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE A TRUE FANFIC WRITER!!!!!!!and believe me i can tell i've read over two thousand.. and ya coulda fooled me that this is yur first fic i mean WOW!!! and last but not least DAMN girl you got sum skills!!! hahahaha i have been wanting to say that forever!!! i hope u decide to continue this fic cuz yur on my favorites list!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!^_^!!!! Ja!!!!
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Reviewed By: kagayaku rei tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 17:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY, MY FAMILY LOVES YOUR STORY, -HELL-, WHO -COULDN'T- LOVE YOUR STORY!!??!!
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 18:41 PDT
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T_T that's just so sad, your descriptions were really good and I could almost picture everything.
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Title: Anne
Reviewed By: Anne_WritinAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 17:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! MORE MORE! YAY I LOVE Yoku/kurama&kagome fics! this was totally a great start! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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