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Title: More, please, More!!
Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 20:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Those last three chapters were great!! I love how Bulma and Vegeta's relationship is developing. And I love how you brought in that skank Marron into the story. I can't believe she would someone after just going down on Yamcha!! Unbelievable!! Anyhow, please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Evil Saint [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 05:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm SO glad to see you're posting here! I love your story and it was one of very few that besieged me to still visit FF.net, but it's just really awesome to see an author of your calibre on a site that doesn't treat writers like dirt. (Sorry... I'm a little less than happy with that site at the moment >_
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 14:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Keep the chaps on coming thanks to bring me up to date!! LOL GETA IN A GAY BAR! =))!!!!!! poor Bulmy oh boy .....out with the next chappy Im dying here >:)
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Title: WHOOPPE!
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYAYAYAYAYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!! FINALLY U PUT IT HERE IM SO GLAD!!!!!! I been a fan of this fic since me not remember but please please oh please keep the chappies on coming I\\\\\\\'ll love reading this beautiful fic again YAY!!!!!!! *bows* LAYER!
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