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| "Last Will and Testiment" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: I'm baaaaaaaaaaaack
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: August 18, 2004 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*Hands over another mystery box with random plushie inside.* Another good chapter, but I think you would do better to keep the song in italics, but that's just my own humble opinion. Also, I think Jou's ascent isn't quite as thick as you make it, but do whatever you need to get the fic written. And I was wondering, are any of the chapters going to be from Seto's P.O.V? Anyway, keep up the good work.
| Title: Good Song, Good Idea
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(not logged in) On: August 17, 2004 03:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
1) You picked a good song. 2) Love how you have Jou's accent in it. 3) I'd like to see where this goes. So here, have a mystery box that contains a random bishounen plushie of your choosing. The more you write, the more I read. The more I read, the more I review. The more I review, the more plushies I give out. And I also promise to give an actual review when there is more of the story to read.
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