| "Just a Simple Friendship?" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: sunshine14586 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY GOOD!! iloved tis story!! please update soon!!!! you've got a really good sense of humor and writing style!! i like it!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Dark Shadow Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo_Hoo! Great story! There's only one thing...My eyes are already ice blue so how does that work? Hmm...do they just seem colder or something? Oh well...What was Siyaki going to say earlier though? Hmm...Oh Uh update soon please! This is just getting good!
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Reviewed By: Sun Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 11:15 CDT
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Aww! So sweet! It gave me chills. I was listening to Kelly Clarkson's 'A moment like this'... Yeah that happens to me a lot... Your story is awsome! Very well written too. Keep up the good work! ^_^ Oh! You know what you could do with this, just a thought, but you could do something where Siyaki (is that right? i have a horrible memory, yet it's excellent... o_O) and Youko spend sometime together and she get's over her 'mate'... or not... Just a thought. Update soon! ^_____^
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Reviewed By: Anime-fangirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 02:35 CDT
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Hey! It wasn't THAT corney! I LOVED IT!!! It was really cute actually! Can't wait for the new update, so, uh...update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: jisAtsU siLENcE On: July 27, 2004 13:26 CDT
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awwww!! so cute!! ^^ .. me like a lot!! wahaha!! i hope you update again soon ... this is really really REALLY good!! wahaha!! ^^ ... GREAT JOB!! =)
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Title: Just a Simple Friendship?
Reviewed By: Tashia On: July 27, 2004 05:44 CDT
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HI!I liked this chapter.I also didnt think that was a corny chapter.Keep up the good work cause ur doing a great job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: CandyKrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 20:30 CDT
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 20:15 CDT
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Yeah I kissed Kurama and we both said we loved each other. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: CandyKrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 14:20 CDT
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Reviewed By: jisAtsU siLENcE On: July 26, 2004 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
noo!! don't stop there!! wait what did Siyaki have to say to me?? ... ohh wellz sokay ^^ ... hehe ... man i guess it would be a good thing never to piss me off =p lolz ... anyways ... awesome chapter!! hope you update again soon!! ^^ =) GREAT JOB!!
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Reviewed By: CandyKrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 11:54 CDT
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Reviewed By: Nakira [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 05:20 CDT
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OMG!!!YOU HURT KURAMA!!!!SHAME!!!!!! please update some more....Okay???? *smiles softly wanting to help Kurama who is like a brother to her*
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Reviewed By: CandyKrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 22:36 CDT
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Reviewed By: Sadeo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 21:44 CDT
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DIEEEEEEEEEEEEE! HOSTAGE LADY______ER PERSON........nah.....that ain't right.........AWWW TO HELL WITH DAT!!!!!!!!!!! I REVIEWED YA STORY YA REVIEW MAH STORY! *spots Final Fantasy 8 game and begins playing?* My.........Playstation must play! Akira: O__________O Kuso! Update! ONEGAI! SADEO-CHAN! IIE! *CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSH!* KABOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!* Asih: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! BLOOOOOODY HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sadeo:--____--*Look up and sweatdrops* Dumb@$$! JA NE!
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 18:15 CDT
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Damn it why a cliify!!!! Please update soon I want to know what happened!!!!
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