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Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 02:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not Bad. Interesting Premise
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Reviewed By: Jaded Shrew On: November 05, 2004 10:20 CST
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dude i love this story soooo much. probibly becuase it involves two of my fav. animes, but anyway, i loved this chapter. i have a feeling Ranma is going to be going with the girls to check on Akane though in the next one ^.^ get the next chapter out soon!!
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Reviewed By: Jaded Shrew On: November 04, 2004 12:01 CST
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sorry it took me so long to reveiw this -- it's been crazy, lol. anyway! this was a great chapter dude, i love where your going with it and can't wait for the next chapter to come out ^.^
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Reviewed By: R.Kelly Mask On: October 27, 2004 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good crossover so far. Do like the way you made the Tenchi crew a lot stronger then 1/2 Crew, then it being the other way around. I can probably see Ranma and the gang trying to get Ryoga lost and find Akane with the sidetrip to Hell.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* Ranma no Baka, how the hell does he get himself into situations like this? Although I suppose it's actually you, the author, who got him and Akane into this situation, ne? Anywayz, great story, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Jaded_shrew [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 21:34 CDT
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this was great dude! i normally do not like crossovers, but this one seems like it's going to be kick ass! i can't wait for the next chapter, so get it out soon, kay?
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Title: You Forgot Tenchi in Your listing!
Reviewed By: Earthy93 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOur style is very fluid and enjoyable, but you need to check the spelling of some of the characters names. Also, you pretty much stuck to the origional plot and stories of the two animes when you began your crossover, which is origional but not half as much as some. I enjoyed reading the first two installments and hope that there will be more of them. But don't forget to mention you took some of your ideas from Tenchi Muyo as well!
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Reviewed By: JackieChan DragonAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 04:57 CDT
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I lke it. I hope you continue. And just in case you do, I'm adding you to my favs!
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Title: WHOA!
Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude that was an awsome prolouge, update soon,
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