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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 09:29 CST
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HA! Serves Sora right! And I wonder what Akane's reaction will be to Ranma? Update soon!
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not in) On: November 22, 2004 16:24 CST
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Geez, Xian-Pu and Kuno are just gonna make things worse! I don't particularily mind Ukyo and Ryoga going... they're less persistent, and might actually end up falling for eachother in the end....^^''. Anywayz, great chapter, update soon!
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Reviewed By: A very pleased Tenchi fan On: November 21, 2004 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good, original story. I do think though that Ryoko's reaction to this engagement would have been to just grab Tenchi and make a run for it. I also think that since Tenchi's grandfather ran away from Jurai rather than marry a woman he didn't love, he would have objected much mor strongly. In the OAV version I believe Tenchi will marry all of his suitors, but if the universe Tenchi can have only one wife, Ayeka would be best for him. There really did seem to be a strong attraction between them and Ryoko must have commited many serious crimes, perhaps even murder, to have become so notorious. In the episode where she ties Tenchi up and drags him off to a cave to 'seduce' him, she is very much like the space pirate of "the Mihoshi Special", who kidnaped and assaulted the police investigator played by Tenchi. I also think Tenchi sees Sasami as a little sister. The universe Mihoshi is more clutzy with few of the redeeming qualities of the OAV Mihoshi. Lastly the universe Washu and Kiyone seem to feel only strong affection for Tenchi such as one would have for a brother. I hope Tenchi's abilities will be increased. He should be able to develop all the abilities Kagato displayed since he is of the direct line and more powerful than his grandfather. I do hope to see this fine story completed.
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Reviewed By: anonymous Tenchi fan On: November 21, 2004 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good, original story. I do think though that Ryoko's reaction to this engagement would have been to just grab Tenchi and make a run for it. I also think that since Tenchi's grandfather ran away from Jurai rather than marry a woman he didn't love, he would have objected much mor strongly. In the OAV version I believe Tenchi will marry all of his suitors, but if the universe Tenchi can have only one wife, Ayeka would be best for him. There really did seem to be a strong attraction between them and Ryoko must have commited many serious crimes, perhaps even murder, to have become so notorious. In the episode where she ties Tenchi up and drags him off to a cave to 'seduce' him, she is very much like the space pirate of "the Mihoshi Special", who kidnaped and assaulted the police investigator played by Tenchi. I also think Tenchi sees Sasami as a little sister. The universe Mihoshi is more clutzy with few of the redeeming qualities of the OAV Mihoshi. Lastly the universe Washu and Kiyone seem to feel only strong affection for Tenchi such as one would have for a brother. I hope Tenchi's abilities will be increased. He should be able to develop all the abilities Kagato displayed since he is of the direct line and more powerful than his grandfather. I do hope to see this fine story completed.
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Title: Flamers
Reviewed By: Hyperman [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 12:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm surprised that you've been getting flames, you obviously have great talent; so I'm going to give you a bit of advice. Flame the Flamers! Do what you have to to track them down and then Flame the Hell out of the bastards!!!. Nothing upsets me more than people who trash talk other people's work because they can only wish to write or be half as creative as you or any other writer. Well its your call, but you shouldn't be getting Flamed. I love your story and can't wait for the next chapter. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not in) On: November 08, 2004 14:50 CST
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Grrr..... I don't like this Jin guy, he sounds like a real bastard to me! Poor Akane, I wonder wats gonna happen to her? Anywayz, great chapter, hope u update soon!
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Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 02:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not Bad. Interesting Premise
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Reviewed By: Jaded Shrew On: November 05, 2004 10:20 CST
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dude i love this story soooo much. probibly becuase it involves two of my fav. animes, but anyway, i loved this chapter. i have a feeling Ranma is going to be going with the girls to check on Akane though in the next one ^.^ get the next chapter out soon!!
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Reviewed By: Jaded Shrew On: November 04, 2004 12:01 CST
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sorry it took me so long to reveiw this -- it's been crazy, lol. anyway! this was a great chapter dude, i love where your going with it and can't wait for the next chapter to come out ^.^
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Reviewed By: R.Kelly Mask On: October 27, 2004 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good crossover so far. Do like the way you made the Tenchi crew a lot stronger then 1/2 Crew, then it being the other way around. I can probably see Ranma and the gang trying to get Ryoga lost and find Akane with the sidetrip to Hell.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* Ranma no Baka, how the hell does he get himself into situations like this? Although I suppose it's actually you, the author, who got him and Akane into this situation, ne? Anywayz, great story, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Jaded_shrew [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 21:34 CDT
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this was great dude! i normally do not like crossovers, but this one seems like it's going to be kick ass! i can't wait for the next chapter, so get it out soon, kay?
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Title: You Forgot Tenchi in Your listing!
Reviewed By: Earthy93 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOur style is very fluid and enjoyable, but you need to check the spelling of some of the characters names. Also, you pretty much stuck to the origional plot and stories of the two animes when you began your crossover, which is origional but not half as much as some. I enjoyed reading the first two installments and hope that there will be more of them. But don't forget to mention you took some of your ideas from Tenchi Muyo as well!
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Reviewed By: JackieChan DragonAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 04:57 CDT
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I lke it. I hope you continue. And just in case you do, I'm adding you to my favs!
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Title: WHOA!
Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude that was an awsome prolouge, update soon,
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