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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: September 12, 2005 16:42 CDT
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You're characterization, sorry to say, sucks. Kagome is wishy-washy, she can't decide who she loves. In the space of 3 chapters, she broke up with Inu, got back together, and broke up again. Also, she sleeps with Miroku on the first date?!? Slut! I'm with Inu on that one, she's a whore. Sango is the hornball, that's just strange. Miroku is a wimp, if he wants Kags, he should say something and stand up to Inuyasha. And if he can't, then he doesn't deserve Kagome. As for Inu, he's possessive, but not THAT bad. He's OOC. So the plot is a little spotty, and the characters are a bunch of morons.
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Title: SQUEE-NESS!!!
Reviewed By: Squeevil Kitty On: August 04, 2005 00:28 CDT
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I love it! one of the best Mir/Kag fics I've seen so far! *petitions* longer chapters!!! more updates! BTW,there is peach shampoo. and when you said blue orbs,I thought you were talking about boobs. ^__^' then I read the A/N. P.s.scariest cliffhanger evar. O__o Your Lord and Master, SqueevilKitty
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Title: how dare you, you bitch, cunt, cum-guzzling gutter whore, jota, perra, loba, etc.
Reviewed By: sakuraforce2, who is much too lazy to sign in On: October 22, 2004 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How dare you. I've been waiting for so damn long, they finally get together, and then you pull a fuckin dream sequence. You either have a heck of a lotta chutzbah, or you have a death wish. If you don't fix this soon, I swear I'll lynch you. By the way, this is the first time I've ever been moved to send a death threat to an author/ess, so congrats. Take pride in this, for you may not have many more events to be proud of.
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Title: hey!
Reviewed By: Yuna1004dream On: October 02, 2004 21:54 CDT
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i am sick of your shit. what? u too good enough to update? i am tired of waiting so get to writing. u dig?
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another cool and fun chapter! I just wished they lasted a bit longer, I know, I am being selfish. But what do you expect when the fic is so good?! Anyway, love it!
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic, it is so fun. You just don't see many good Kagome and Miroku fics like this. I have enjoyed it very much so far and know I will continue to do so! Love it!!!!
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Title: o.o Orbies!
Reviewed By: The now signle forsurely rejected hentai baka Inuyasha....In kikyou's bra On: September 16, 2004 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.o Just keeps getting better and better.... And.... Inuyasha never to Sitted... Interesting.....MUHAHAHAAHAH!
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh, that is so sweet, poor Miroku loves Kagome!!! He didn't even fight InuYasha back!!! Awwwww. I love your writing skills!!! Such awesome work!
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Title: Chap 6.
Reviewed By: The now Single Rejected Miroku Beating Inuyasha On: August 23, 2004 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it n.n XD Laughed my ass off.... Just ot think of Inuyasha as the jeallous boyfriend... Miroku the man-whore... And Kagome....>.>; The cheating bitch?...... Welll tis a good way to do it..... It seems like people would expect things to happen... But if yo uwant some ideas I can help n.n.... Twists are my specialty remember? >.o
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what unexpected events!!! So what happens now! Hmmm, I guess I HAVE to be patient (hehehehe) and wait and see. Love your fic!!!
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: Obese_a_tron5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sad! InuYasha is such a turd. Poor Kagome, in a way. She had Miroku over, but then Inuyasha came...Oh well, very nice chapter, you are a great writer! Can't wait for your next update!
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Reviewed By: darckinu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 12:44 CDT
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Ok girl i have a few questions this is a Miroku Kagome? well it's a weird pairing but something good you try with someone else well, poor Inu he doesn't deserves that i hate people cheating but anyway i like this story hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: Loco Coco On: August 14, 2004 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got a good story on your hands with this one. It's interesting the way you portray almost all of the characters in this story. It's very intriguing. I don't think people have the guts really to actually make Sesshomaru gay or Kikyo lesbian but it's interesting when it is. It takes a very open minded person to do that stuff. It's different from the drum of unoriginal (yet called original) stories for InuYasha. Oh this story is also very humorous. The way the characters think and feel is very unique. Great job and update real soon. Adios (oh and I'm not actually as smart as this review sounds) (hehe)
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Reviewed By: Katgome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehehehehehehehehehehehe. Bad little Kagome. No wonder she is checking him out, we all know how big his staff is, we have all seen it!! hehehehe. Sorry, I just needed to laugh. Anyway, I love this fic, it is going to be a really fun one. Great work!
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Reviewed By: Inu Riko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
go! write sommore. and no, i dont really feel srry for inu-chan. i mean, he gose off to kikyou a lot, and when someone other then him shows the tinyest bit of interset, BOOM! he gose off like a rocket! anywayz! keep it up! i really like!
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