| "Renegade Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 93 ] |
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Title: chap 1
Reviewed By: Kazeli [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok so i noticed several grammer errors you mispelled yusuke once and used meet in the wrong way 2 times where you used meet should have been met. meet is future tense as in will happen. For example i am going to meet somone. met is past tense. for example- i had met somone. or -when we met. or- when i met somone. past tense is had happened. other then that the chap loks prety darn good greatwork and i will review da other chapters. (yes i know this fic is long finished but pple still read them and this is my second time reading this one)
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Reviewed By: goddeskagome213 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 23:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Its soo goood!!!!! When are you gonna update it. It been sooo long. Four years I think. PLZ PLZ update.
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Title: SESSHOMARU/FLAME
Reviewed By: anastasia_dog_demon_princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I vote for Flame/Sesshomaru and I vote Kikyo/InuYasha to die.
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Reviewed By: amaya_vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like it. please update soon, my vote is for flame/hiei and Sango/kurama
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Title: Renegade Miko
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: perfect little girl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 13:08 CST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE. IT IS SO GOOD!!!!!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 07:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice story, pair inu-yasha with sum1 else, not any of da sisters, maybe botan will do, but definitly noe ka-flame, i mean, i want flame to be paired with hiei, kk? hiei/flame -> flame/hiei
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Title: hn
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 07:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i vote for hiei/kagome, i mean hiei/flame! kk?!?!!?!
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Reviewed By: Revenge Is a Bitch 89 On: August 15, 2005 03:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ALL I HAVE TO SAY IS KILL KIKYO KILL THAT DEAD CLAY PLOT BITCH MAKE HER DEAD AND NOOOOOO COMMING BACK TO LIFE !!!
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Reviewed By: Sleep_Over_Queen and friends On: August 15, 2005 03:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Flame/Sesshomaru: 10 Flame/Hiei: 10 Sango/Kurama: 5 Hiei/Flame/Sesshomaru: 10 Yukina/Idoit: 5 Shuzume/Koga: 5 Kikyo/InuYasha to die: 5 Keiko/Yusuke: 5 ME AND MY GALS HAD GAL'S NIGHT AND WE LOVED YOUR STORY WE SOMETIMES VOTED 2 TIMESEACH BECAUSE WE LIKED A CERENT PAIR. THEIR IS 5 OF US AND WE ALL JUST WANTED U 2 KNOW HOW WE ALL FELT. WE HOPE U UPDATE SOON WE LOVE THE WAY U PUT THE GUYS IN CHEEK AND HAS FLAME RULE OVER ALL AND WE LOVE THE ADJUSTMENTS (I CANT SELL AND MY FRIENDS WONT HELP ME**RUNS AWAY FROM FLYING DAGGERS**) YOU MADE TO FLAME AND WE THINKS IT ROCKS 100000% ;D :D >:D HOPE U UP DATE SOON JA NE!
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story but I would appriciate it if you would update preety please. I vot H/K. WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sherlock On: June 04, 2005 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been the best story i have ever read Pairings Inu/ dies Flam/Heia Sango/Kurama Keep up the good work ^-^
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Reviewed By: Lady Manic On: May 07, 2005 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:) I loved it ohhhhhhhhhhh please hurry up and update. (: :) well g2g see you BYE-BYE (:
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Title: Renegade Miko
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 14:31 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Renegade Miko
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 15:19 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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