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Reviewed By: Simfrmpeterlee On: October 04, 2004 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent! just Excellent!!! continue
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Title: aww tso tweet =^.^=
Reviewed By: Rude02 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 21:01 CDT
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Tooth akingly sweet. Wondering how the rest of the guys will take the news? OH yeah, the threesome sounds awfully yummy =~_^= polishes wiskers, meowr! And it should be 6x5x2 or 6x2x5 anyway a seme Zechsy and uke/seme Wu and Shini. Dont see Zechs playing seme for anyone but Treize.
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Reviewed By: Mite Mite [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I
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Reviewed By: SomaliChan On: September 05, 2004 11:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well if Treize is not going to stand by Heero, I'll help the other pilots kill him!! Well I'm glad that Heero finally has his loved one beside him once more. *grins*
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Title: rudegial@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Rude wuv 13 On: September 04, 2004 17:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dude... you lost me on the door thing, what did Sally mean she opened the door and gave Duo 5 seconds to fix it. Duo? Explain pwease?! Oh! an beware of the typos: -..she went made for the stairs ... 'went or made' -..quietened into hiccups .... I think is 'quieted' - ..that means it much be real... 'must' There could be a few more but those are grammar mistakes, and I suck at grammar... U_U Dont sweat it though, this fic is cool! Mpreg are too 'out there' for some yaoi fans but a lot of us like them too.
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Reviewed By: sapphire1 On: September 04, 2004 13:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
sweet - really sweet more please
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Reviewed By: Izabella On: September 04, 2004 10:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey great story even if I'm not a big fan of 13x1. I was wondering what you are going to do with Zechs...how about a 6x5x2? Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Rude like's 13 too On: August 28, 2004 20:57 CDT
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Like the unlikely couple! ^_^ but then again I'm all for 13 x any-bishonen Cute Heero! Wu and Duo too. Upadateta (º__º) soon as u can!!
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Reviewed By: sapphire1 On: August 20, 2004 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i have never read a 13x1 before and am really enjoying this - must have more please
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Reviewed By: SomaliChan On: August 16, 2004 08:58 CDT
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I'm glad that the rest are taking this well........then again Wufei still doesn't know this yet. Sigh.......I do hope that Heero is fine. YUppers, hope that theycan get Treize out soon for the reunion. YUp Treize better treat Heero right or I will kick his ass! Heheh I think it's really sweet to see Zechs being so concerned abt Heero *grins* More?
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Reviewed By: SnakeMistress On: August 11, 2004 23:13 CDT
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me really like this chapter. it was neat so the long wait is forgiven. ja matte ne. arigatou
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Reviewed By: SnakeMistress On: July 24, 2004 13:30 CDT
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i hope you do up date. another wonderful chapter. i still want at least a LITTLE more detail but other than that i love it
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Reviewed By: Relena Omoa-o-korosu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 14:04 CDT
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yes continue. this is well written and a good plot. you don't see many like this any more and defiantly not many 13x1. i've been searching for a new fanfic and i truly hope this one will become one i can read alot. which means you have to write many many chapters. so do continue and you could try adding more details. that's the only improvement i see. :-D ja matte ne
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Reviewed By: cj On: July 21, 2004 00:55 CDT
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I wouldn't mind if you continued. You write well. Hell, you write well enough for me to read a story that would usually have me twitching. *not a big fan of the mpreg* So I say go for it.
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Reviewed By: Damast On: July 20, 2004 20:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yes. Yes. Continue please.
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