Title: SxS fangirl
Reviewed By: jaydesummers On: July 22, 2004 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a very well written, well thought out story. However, the POV switches are very confusing. I think that for the next story in this series you may wish to indicate who is speaking. Or try at least splitting the dialogue into the appropriate scenes. ^_^
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