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"Alone, Together" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: SWOTBWOT [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 14, 2005 17:18 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
A nice piece of angst. Feels like it could use a sequel, too. It's not often you see Yuki x Ryuichi, but it makes sense if Yuki is attracted to Shuichi, someone so much like Ryuichi. Also, it's nice to see a more adult Ryuichi, instead of the childlike one.
 Reviewed By: tutseti [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 03, 2004 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story was very enjoyable read. Just fix a few grammatic errors and find a way to make the song fit more with the story. Other than that, nice job. ^_^

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