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Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 04:08 CDT
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mm you've got me caught up in this! please write some more, i'm watching with great interest! :)
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Title: Chapter Six
Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an amazing story so far... It is really well written and has a lot of great intulectual(sp) dialog. I would have reviewed sooner, I just couldn't stop reading it. I marked this in my favorites. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 19:59 CDT
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This has been really interesting so far. ^_^ I'm glad you updated or I wouldn't have seen this story. You've definitely got a good mystery vibe going. Who killed Kikyo? Why did they kill her? Why can't Inuyasha remember anything? WHO TOOK MY CHOCOLATE CAKE?! I'm hoping you'll keep updating so I can find out the answers to these questions...well, except that last one. I think I'm on my own there. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: inuyashafanaticllmv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nooooooooooo how could it end just there *pout* i love ur story so much especially ur writing style :)
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Reviewed By: Hyena On: May 27, 2008 06:12 CDT
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UUUUPPPDDDDDAAAATTTTTEEEEEEEEE if you please
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Reviewed By: Hyena On: May 26, 2008 10:22 CDT
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UUUUUPPPPDDDDDAAAAATTTTEEEEE please
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Reviewed By: Anina On: May 22, 2008 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
But why...? Why are the good stories always incomplete or abandoned? You didn't update this story since 2006! Please don't give it up, it's too good to be left in such a state! ~Anina-chan
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Reviewed By: katie33h [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 13:00 CDT
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This story is really great so far. i hope you havent abandoned it! i love the cannon esque quality and the interation between charaters. Again i hope you didnt give it up ... your reviews are kind of low in numbers but its ok i hope that that didnt detur you!
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 11:59 CST
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I really like this story, I just started reading it. I have only read 5 or 6 chapters. I am confused about one thing, Kagome was thinking that about Kikyo and what she had told her about Inuyasha and that she could imagine her cheating on him. I could be mistaken, I'll go back and check later, but didn't she say in an early chpter she never knew Kikyo was engaged or even her Inuyasha's name until the furneral? I can't wait to finish reading what you have so far. Again, LOVE the story
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Reviewed By: C.A. (not signed in) On: January 14, 2007 11:45 CST
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Wow... I'm really liking this story. It's going on my favs list so I know when it's updated :P I knew from your referencing the broken step that it would be significant in some way. Your characterization is really good as well. Poor Inu, not knowing if he killed his fiance or not. I just love it. I'll be waiting for an update :P
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 05:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I knew he would figure out that the clue was in the steps, maybe it is in the loose one he never got to fix that has the clue. And I wonder what it is, well I'll find out in your next chapter or so. Hope you update soon and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Sidelines On: October 25, 2006 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The neverending Story. The rockbiter says that line, my favorite movie as a small child by the way. Anyways great story, keep writing and I will keep reading.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is good. I like it a lot, but I really like the mistery in the story and the love. I bet you're going to torture us by taking to damn long to update this wonderful story huh? Well please don't, its to good. So please update soon and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Bumbleflies and Butterbees [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! Oh wow oh wow! I absolutely LOVE this story. I just started into this yesterday and couldn't stop reading it. You are an amazing writer! I love the way you combine humor and mystery and romance into one. It just rolles off the page. I absolutely LOVE the way you portray all of the characters. You make them your own without completely deviating from the real character. It is awesome. I absolutely love the story line and plot, but I really loved this last chapter. THEY KISSED!!!! WHOO HOO!!! I'm really excited right now. Anywho. I can't wait for the next chapter to come up. I'm really excited about it. Until then.... Happy Writing!
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Reviewed By: hi On: September 10, 2005 03:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon
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Reviewed By: Night_Miko (not logged in) On: April 19, 2005 03:18 CDT
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I am so glad you have updated. I hope everything in your life becomes less complicated. I hope that you will update once again soon.
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Reviewed By: Night_Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 19:04 CST
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I'm upset that you haven't updated in 3 months. I hope you do soon because I still want to know what happens next. You left it in a great spot. I hope you do soon.
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Title: Putting On My Bib
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 15:46 CST
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Oh man, talk about Drool Me An Ocean. All 3 Tashio men in the same room. I'm starting to drink water now because If I don't, I will start to dehydrate as soon as it happens and I start drooling. Hopefully it will happen soon before I get waterlogged? I really like this story. Even Kikyo is shown in a sympathetic light which doesn't happen very often. I can't stop thinking about how she died. I KNOW Inu didn't kill her, but the circumstances around her death are so very strange. I figure that Naraku was her lover, but I'm not sure just how they got the drugs into InuYasha. I wanna know. Enquiring Minds Want To Know. It blows me away that this fic has so few reviews. It's an awesome fic people, full of suspense, mystery, sexual tension, angst, and humor. The quintessential, well rounded fic. I am really looking forward to Kagome meeting Inu's father, and brother. In so many fics, Inu is the image of his father, and Sess the image of his mother. But all three of them in the same room? I just want to sit and drool, err, think about that for awhile. MMMMMMMM
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Title: Yippy, another chapter!!
Reviewed By: QTpie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 01:05 CST
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Ohh, this story is getting better by the chapter!!! I should be studying for my advanced chem final exam, which I'm writing tomorrow, but I just couldn't wait to read the next chapter! Anyways, I absolutely love how you balance descriptive detail with plot and character development. You write in a very straight forward and simplistic manner that makes this story extremely enjoyable and maintains the readers' attention. After reading this chapter, you've got me wondering who is Kagome's stocker...could it be the same person that's out to kill Inu? Presumably Naraku. I do hope there's a lot more I&K interaction in the next chapter because the sexual tension between the two of them is driving me crazy with anticipation. On a slightly different note, I agree that Sabi-chan's stories are an excellent read. I'm currently enjoying her story "My Will." Well, I can hardly wait for your next chapter already...update ASAP please and thank you!!!
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Title: yay ur back!
Reviewed By: smittin kittin (nlo) On: December 07, 2004 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chap! glad to see u back thanks 4 the update! side note i also get car sick (shakeshead) nothing ruins a road trip like puking out the window! anywho..i actualy travel with ginger cookies & propel ^_^ i gotta ask tho...what's the deal with the whole kill inu thing? is naru worried he & kag will figure out the not so obvious truth? can't wait 4 the next chap update when u can! thanks 4 sharing smooches kittin! p.s i sooo love 'Bus stop fairytale too! really one of the best fics here! got any more sugestions? please let me know! even tho i don't have much time 2 write now i still love 2 read when i get the chance! thanks!
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Reviewed By: scherezade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 21:26 CDT
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Thank god that you think we need more action too! I am *dying* for Inu and Kag to get it on! You've done such a terrific job with creating the characters..I mean they truly pop off the page. You've managed to make Inuyasha aggressive and rude but vulnerable at the same time. And Kagome is sweet but has a spine of steel. Actually, as I'm writing this and thinking about the characters again, I really have to reiterate...great character depictions. I mean, you've made them real and three dimensional. I hope you update soon because I'm dying for Inu-kag action!!
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Reviewed By: Kestrel Moonhaven On: October 01, 2004 19:02 CDT
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This story is getting better and better. Update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter.
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Title: glad u updated!
Reviewed By: smittin kittin. (NLI) On: September 16, 2004 00:42 CDT
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Wow i still can't believe more people haven't r/r this awesome fic! u know i've loved it from the first chap so i was super excited 2 see 2 chaps i hadn't read...i think ur doing a rally nice job with the pace. sometimes people rush 2 the romance but ur writing the story & allowing it 2 progress at it'a own pace which makes 4 an injoyable read! BTW glad 2 hear about the job congrats! it's good 2 be amongst the employed again ne? hope u still find 2 update this fic i'll be looking out 4 it when u do! No rush tho i totally understand how real life can keep u away from writing. Thaks 4 sharing another intreging chap. 2 this wonderful mystery fic! smooches smittin ^_^
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Reviewed By: tail wagger(not signed in) On: September 15, 2004 08:51 CDT
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Nice chapter, I'm looking forward to more. I noticed however that Kagome first birates Inuyasha for his use of "fuck" and then uses it several times herself. I don't like the word, (I have bad asociactions with it) but if thats were you want to take her that's fine. I just thought it was funny so soon after her comment to InuYasha Also, to add to your fact at the end, poseys weren't just flowers to ward off the smell. they were combinations of flowers that were thought to ward off the illness and offten contained rosemary which does have anticeptic properties (or something like anticeptic... it's been a while since I've studied herb lore in a big way)
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Reviewed By: Kestrel Moonhaven On: September 15, 2004 07:22 CDT
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I love this story! You're doing a great job with it. Who wouldn't want to see a naked Inu? LOL. Update soon!
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Title: heee hee
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 02:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i'm just reviwing again i love this story!!!ja
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Title: yeh
Reviewed By: Kikyou104 On: September 14, 2004 02:01 CDT
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i love this story so far please please please please please update soon it's such a good plot i can see the twist and turns this is going to make...again i say update soon cuz this is a story worth finishing!!!!!! ja ne...kikyou_104
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Title: great chap!
Reviewed By: smittin kittin. (NLO) On: August 21, 2004 04:16 CDT
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Irritable dog & impossibe jackass (lol) best line of chap! I loved this chap it was very well writen the conversation between Kag & Inu seemed natural & the way u revealed Miro's history while he tried 2 spy on Sang was brilliant! Can't wait 4 next update please keep it up! I hope u find work soon unemployment sucks! U said ur in early childcare...good 4 u it takes a lot of heart 2 perform such a thankless job. Ur karma is probably good & the universive will reward u! Smooches Smittin
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Title: Keep it up!
Reviewed By: smittin kittin.(NLO) On: August 21, 2004 03:42 CDT
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Wow, I thought I'd put ur fic on my fav list? I'll have 2 check that out! Anyway I still can't believe more folks haven't r/r I'm gonna try 2 remember 2 recomend it 2 my readers. I love how u portrayed Miro in this chap! The whole conversation with Inu was funny! I think u did a nice job giving background on Inu without getting bogged down with boring details. Well I'm off 2 read next chap ja ne! Smooches Smittin
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 20:56 CDT
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Hey, I just stumbled across this story and really enjoyed everything I've read thus far...especially the last chapter where Inu and kag meet one another. Your descriptions are detailed without going overboard and I think you definitely have an interesting plot. Did Inu do it? If not him, then who? If he did...was he in full demon rage mode or something? I'm a ridiculously obsessive Inu-Kag fan and am looking forward to seeing how you get the two together despite the doubts about Inu's role in Kikyo's death. Please do update..don't be discouraged by lack of reviews..sometimes it takes a while to catch on. If you update soon, it will bump the story to the top (and I'll be happy) :)
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