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| "Toy Store FROM HELL" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Title: Paranoid Oddity
Reviewed By: Web On: July 22, 2004 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
w00t! Finally, something to look forward to. =D o.o Mmkay, I wanna be in it dood! My character's name is, of course, Web. She has short spikey white-blonde hair and wears faded jeans with rips in the knees, an orange T-shirt with the caffeine molecule on it (http://www.thinkgeek.com/images/products/front/lg-girl-caffeine.jpg in case you're wondering what the hell a caffeine molecule is), and a pair of copper-colored faery wings. She always runs around barefoot so... o.o yeah, no shoes. She's human, though she likes to think of herself as a faery. She pretty much acts like some... odd person who glares at everyone. But she likes to play with toys (s'why she would be stuck there) and she likes to play pranks on people. She hides a lot and climbs on things. She also loves throwing things at people and she growls, hisses, and makes odd noises more than she talks. Annnd that's all, I think. o.o Ask me if you need more.
| Title: ..yo!
Reviewed By: xXHakuRyuXx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 12:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name:Liria Race: half fire demon Physical Description: Medium black hair, is 5'2 black eyes. Attitude: Is sarcastic, has a sharp tounge, loud (acts like Yusuke alot) until she's pissed, and then hell takes over when she is. O.o
| Title: It's Nako
Reviewed By: Great chappie On: July 22, 2004 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would seriously like to join in Sad-san. Its Nako.
| Title: this is fun
Reviewed By: jins girl On: July 22, 2004 11:52 CDT
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i want to be in it, name: kite, blue eyes and brown hair with midnight blue streaks, i'm a wind demon, i'm 5ft. i'm short. personality: cheerful, giggles alot, but very sarcastic,is jin going to be in the story? cuz he's my fav. thanks
| Title: OoOoOoOo scary toy store
Reviewed By: Chibi Trey On: July 22, 2004 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome!!! OC info Name: Trey Gender: Female Height: 5'4'' Race: Demon/Spellcaster Type of Demon: 1/6 Fire, 1/6 Ice, 1/6 Wind, 1/6 Water, 1/6 Earth, 1/6 Thunder Demon Appearance: black hair, 2 inches past the shoulder, red-violet eyes Personality: chaotic, layed back, energetic, has a bit of a short attention span, friendly, kind, smart ~ Looks like it's going to be really funny, awsome, please update soon!!!
| Reviewed By: Kuramas_Yami_Grl On: July 22, 2004 11:26 CDT
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I what to be in this! Name: Just call me Kurama's, Hair: Purple with red streaks, Eyes: also purple, Height: 5'4 1/2 (I sad I short! : { boo hoo), Personality: Moody, Horny, and just a plain old bitch. YAY!!!
| Reviewed By: KitsuneShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 11:19 CDT
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I found it funny and well... what the hell? Name- Kori Race- Fox Demon Appearance- Long blonde hair with black streaks, blue eyes, black ears, black tail Personality- Mysterious, Scary, and sneaky
| Title: review?
Reviewed By: Haruko On: July 22, 2004 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Knowing you, this story is going to be really funny... but kinda weird. ^^ Twas a good starting chapter, and I can't wait for the next. (I've saved the link.) Um... yeah... Ah, what the hell. Oc info: Name: Lita ...human... 5'4", brown hair, brown eyes Personality: fun-loving, kinda slow (mind-wise) at times... yeah.
| Title: .> Is one of these nessasary...?
Reviewed By: Geonah On: July 22, 2004 10:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps* yea! 0.o okay, um....glad we got this up!!! Yea!!! dang, I need to lay off the caffeen... ~geonah-chan~
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