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Title: damn...
Reviewed By: INuyashalover27 *not logged in* On: August 24, 2004 02:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats sooo fucked up man... i went to the same warped tour as u in fact i saw u there! I didn't get one autograph u lucky bastard. LOL anyways... love story update!
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Reviewed By: PrincessAI [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 22:59 CDT
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Title: how dare u...
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ADAM IS SO MUCH HOTTER THEN PARSONS U CHEATER!! LoL sry but it's true and u said it yourself ^_^. I feel bad for the Amirah in this story. I think u *ahem* she should tlel adam and be all sry and stuff. Like u no something will happen sex or something. Like adam will smoke a dozen and Amirah will stop try and stop him and then they will start kissing and everything will end up into the bed and like before that Adam will go after Parsons and they will fight. Amirah will find out and have to go break it up with Matt or Mark or someone. Then Adam will storm off and go smoke a few packs. Write a song while he's at it bout heart breaking moments and scream during it. Something really bad and then like little by little adam misses u and stuff and then it all ends up in lustful desire in bed. *Knowing u 2.* Adam and u have a long talk and stuff like that. Well keep up the awsome work and i think this story will end up pretty good.
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Title: damn
Reviewed By: PrincessAI [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 16:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
did anybody write one of these?(review)
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Title: I hate u...
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your clift hangers but they really piss me off... nothing is wrong with them. I'm just saying. *Forget it* O yea and what did i tell you about non-anime stories Amirah? Keep up the good work!! ^_^
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Title: ok
Reviewed By: PrincessAI [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 23:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
courtney is crazy!!!
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Title: just checking my reviews!
Reviewed By: PrincessAI [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 01:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm just looking at what you people said to me!
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Title: Dude....
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SHIT!! DO WHAT U WANT!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
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Title: WHAT!!!!???
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW CAN U DO THAT!!! Dude update pleasez!!! U evil person... u!!! *lol, ttyl*
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Title: umm..wow
Reviewed By: Princessai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 01:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
are inuyashlover and sabrina the only one who read my story? its cool.
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Title: what hold up...
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 21:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
SABRINA!!! HEY!!! * do that shit in real life* WE DON'T NEED THAT IN THE FANFICTIONS!!!
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Title: Drunk....
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WE NEED TO GET EVERYONE TOGETHER LIKE THAT.... o damn we ain't old enough... hey remember what i said at your house... bout those ID's! LOL I loved the chapters. Keep it up! This might only be your sencond fic (I no the first) but dude straight up you are the most funniest author or fanfictions. I have never red a funnier story than this one. THIS IS MY FAVORRITE FANFICTION!!!! *I really want to c GC drunk... that would be funny...*
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE!!! I no your bro went to Jail ans i no yuor happy. When u told me u were very happy. *Sigh* Please update asap!!
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Title: death comes quickly to those who wait
Reviewed By: Sabrina Usagi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 03:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it it just needs more courtney bashing andgetting hurt then it is golden!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok just a tiny pecie of advice Amirah.... like sometimes say who is talking cause in some parts i got a little lost. But in any other cases very nice!! I enjoyed this fic alot so far.
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