| "Hope For A Lost Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 20:54 CDT
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Well at lest Seto found her. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 21:52 CDT
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No a cliffy. Update soon, please I want to know what happens.
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 19:59 CDT
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Well at lest Seto now knows she didn't tell anyone. I hope he can find her. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 23:21 CDT
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I know Seto was going to be angry. I hope he'll forgive her and help her. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 20:28 CDT
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Don't tell me Leona spilled. Seto isn't going to be happily about this. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Tamra of Egypt (not logged on) ~ sorry i was too lazy...*smiles* On: July 30, 2004 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UR story is really good, but there is one thing that i noticed in your fanfic on the last chapter: 'The truth' You said that Kaiba was ten when his father died and Mokuba was three. Yet in the beginning when Kaiba's mother dies he was five when Mokuba was born. Therefore Mokuba should be five instead of three. It's like he ages slower than any human being in the world. ~ I just thought to clear that up. It would have been bugging me for the whole day. Anywayz update soon
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Reviewed By: Lady Nightshadows [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 22:55 CDT
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awe hoe cute *tear* I need a tissue* update soon and I like the fact Seto is actually nice in the story *well sofar* =D
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 19:10 CDT
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That was a sweet ending. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 16:47 CDT
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Wow Seto's being really nice. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Master Duelist Kaori(not logged in. ugh.) On: July 27, 2004 21:22 CDT
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Good chapter!
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 19:36 CDT
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Seto's really nice when he wants to be. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Jordan L. Stokes On: July 26, 2004 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading your story. I thought it was very unique because not to many people write this kind of story often. I also thought that the story was well develop,written,and edited.( No mistakes)Good job, and continue to write great stories you created. I'm really to read the end!!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: Master Duelist Kaori [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 20:50 CDT
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This is a very good story, just like your other two! Keep up the good work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 17:19 CDT
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Yeah Seto saved her. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Kurama13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 17:59 CDT
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This is intereasting. Hope you update soon.
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