| "The Broken Horn" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hanoi (not signed in) On: January 30, 2005 14:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story and I think you doubt yourself too much. Despite the fact that you use elements of other stories, the way in which you use them is very original. I mean, take your Peter Pan metaphor for example. Besides that, the way you write is fluid and enjoyable. The only thing I would personally like to see more of in the story (You're doing great on updates by the way) is maybe a little more sexual tension between Kagome, Inu, and the other characters -say Daisuke? Oh, and are you going to put Kikyo in the story? When is Sango going to make another appearance?
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Title: Very Cool
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 11:09 CST
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I just read this whole story for the first time. I love it and I can't wait for you to update again!
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Reviewed By: Azncouchpotato On: January 29, 2005 01:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love this story. I just read through it and a can get enough of it. I hope u update very soon.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: January 28, 2005 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story. cool unoriginal/original idea ;)
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Reviewed By: kalina_mika On: January 09, 2005 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, your story is wonderful and i absolutly love it! from the first chapter i was hooked. this is the first fic in a long time that i have read that really seems professiona. your writing and descriptions are great and i feel like im reading a real book. i have nothing but good things to say about this story and i envy you and wish i could get around to making my fics as good as this. i cant wait to read more so for this adoring fan, update soon!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(nsi) On: December 06, 2004 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
=D
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, I love it, I could hardly pull my eyes away and I was so disappointed when it was over! This story is soooo good that I was sad to see it end... I can't wait until your next update! Such a wonderful and fresh idea, it makes for an interesting and attention grabing read... I love your writting too, very good. I also love all of your characters. Usual OCs are annoying to read about in a story, but in yours they're funny, each with they're own special personallities, and they don't dimish the enjoyment of reading the story whatsoever but rather enhance it. The interaction between the characters is just simply wonderful, especially between Kagome and Inuyasha... I shall be watching every day for your next installment, keep up the good work! ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: LSIE(Offline) On: August 20, 2004 13:52 CDT
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This story, is yet again, so very good. I loved every minute of this chapter. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: RabidFan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really...really good. *Blown away* I thought Inuyasha was a bit OCC and maybe Kagome was also but they where still GOOD the way they where. Oh well, I liked it a lot. There was so many quotes ferom other things like: Never an awfly long time(PeterPan) and Pirate of the Carribean("Have I ever given you any reason not to trust me?") and even Aladin (Do you trust me?)!!! It was great wonderful, excelent! It was hilarious!!!! Please update!
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Reviewed By: overly unknown girl On: August 15, 2004 17:49 CDT
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its great, but i dont understand what exactly is going to happen, most of the time i do, so yeah, that means you are doing good, yeah well there you go a review.............
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Reviewed By: LSIE(Offline) On: August 09, 2004 00:55 CDT
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This story is fucking AWESOME! I can't wait to read the next chapter. If you change your summery. I'm positive you'll get more readers... just a suggestion.
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Reviewed By: lil_angel_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 10:14 CDT
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i love it. i absolutely love. i was practically gapeing at the itsy bitsy scroll bar. ..how the hell do u spell 'gapeing' anyways? so ne who, i hope you update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: MutelyMe22 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 08:25 CDT
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YOUR STORY IS GREAT! I really love it and hope you update as soon as you can! ^_^
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 21:10 CDT
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i really like it. it seems interestin n i definitely havent read anything like it before. can't wait for the next update =D
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