| "Lady Strike" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Title: Athuren suks
Reviewed By: Athuren sucks On: March 26, 2005 11:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story and I think the pairings should be kira/kagome Yazhk/flay and Athuren/caggali nicol flay and D/M.
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Title: kira/kagome
Reviewed By: kira10110 On: March 26, 2005 11:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story and I like the fact that inu/gundam crossover. As you can obvoiusly tell by the title I want an kira/kagome pairing and I think flay should bie in the worst way possible please make it a kira/kagome pairing.Keep writing fics.
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Reviewed By: JesterMe On: March 16, 2005 08:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want a Yzak/Kagome pairing. Keep Writing
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Title: sorry to say but
Reviewed By: LERRIUQS On: March 12, 2005 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't want to be rude but, and I'm incredibly sorry to say this but ...YOU'VE TURNED KAGOME INTO A MARY-SUE!! Sorry I just had to do that, no, I'm not trying to insult you, you're a good writer, its just Mary-sues kinda bother me. SORRY, SORRY, SORRY, SORRY, SORRY, SORRY, SORRY, SORRY, SORRY!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hiei_Shadow On: March 12, 2005 15:52 CST
Comment/Review:
could it please be Kira\Kagome\Athrun? Please? I'm begging.
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Reviewed By: sisko66002(not signed in) On: March 12, 2005 15:51 CST
Comment/Review:
this is a wonderful story. i saw that people had voted for a Kira\Kagome\Athrun and i think tha twould be a very interesting lemon, so i'm gonna put my vote in for that
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 11:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Oooo! You reposted! Does that mean you're going to start updating again soon? I really really hope so. Although a iy/gs fic is completely unbelieveable, when you read fiction, you're supposed to put your sence of reality on the back burner anyway, ne? Anyway, i'm really glad you're writing this fic. There are almost no others like this out there. I'm not so pleased with your characterization of kagome so far, but i guess 550+ years will change anyone, huh? As far as pairings go, i'm torn between athrun/kag and kira/kag. Not sure if i can see athrun and kira in a triangle, but maybe you can make it work. I'm really not a flay fan, so if you could arrange an "accident" or something, i wouldn't complain. You could blow her up in a shuttle like in the series, or stick her in the crossfire of some huge battle, or i don't know. Use your imagination. Anyway, i guess i'm getting a little off topic. All i really wanted to say was that i'm really excited someone is writing a iy/gs crossover, and i hope you update real soon. Ja!
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Reviewed By: lemonpie On: March 09, 2005 20:58 CST
Comment/Review:
ohh i hope it's kira/kagome!!! Uptade soon
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Reviewed By: Black Dragon101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 07:31 CST
Comment/Review:
I luv ur fic so far. Do you think you could possible do a Kira/Kagome/Athrum pairing, please? Because i want Kagome to get with either Kira or Athrum, but I dont want Kira and Athrum to drift apart and become enemies or rivals.
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Reviewed By: ^-^ kiralover On: February 27, 2005 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KIRA AND KAGOME PAIRING!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rose's Petal On: December 12, 2004 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font ColorOooopps! I spelt my name wrong! I love your story! I've tried to review your story on FanFiction.net but you don't allow anomynous reviews! I'm still voting Kira/Kagome! If you can make a love triangle between Kira/Kagome/Athrun! I hate FLAY! Update your story sooon! Because it's great don't stop writing this fanfic! I've seen VERY few Inuyasha/Gundam Seed crossovers! Ja Ne, Rose's Petal
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Reviewed By: Rose'd Petal On: December 12, 2004 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you fic! Update soon! I vote Kira/Kagome and a little Athrun/Kagome fluff!
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 03:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok, i'm going to have to go ahead and vote for kagome/athrun, only because i love the kira/lacus pairing. I really couldn't care less about the other pairings. Except flay. i dont really care for her, so if you could arrange for her to have an "accident" that would be greeaaat. and update real soon, onegai!
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Title: Oppertunities abound!
Reviewed By: GCN_anime_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The S&G 9 is just my pickiness...don't mind me. Hmmm, can I vote for more than one? Um how 'bout: Athrun/Cagalli, Yzak/Kagome, Nicol/Lacus and Dearka/Miriallia? THAT WOULD BE COOL! Ja ne! Update soon...
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 12:57 CST
Comment/Review:
kicked ass kicked ass kicked ass. please you have got to update as soon as you can it was getting reallllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy good and i want ot know whats going to happen so you can't end it there. please i'm begging you update update update. oh and for pairings i vote for Kira/Kagome/Athrun. Ja Ne Airy
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