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 Title: can i get max or Joey
Reviewed By: Kimba  On: August 08, 2004 20:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
NAME:Raiku AGE:15 HIGHT:5'9" HAIR COLOR: blue with black bangs EYE COLOR:green Likes:Blading,singging, and danceing, fightting Dislikes:Pink! and the that pink hair girl of the white tigers( Can think of her name right now) Weakness:her little brother( The only family she has left) Personality:don't say mush around new people, dance to songs if she hears them ( No matter where she is) . Clothes: a black and blue look alike of Rei's outfit I would like to be paires up with:,MAX or Joey ( I like blondes)!
 Title: PICK ME!
Reviewed By: dark_demon_princess [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 08, 2004 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
NAME:Ashley AGE:13 HIGHT:5'3" HAIR COLOR:Brown with crimson stereks(sholder length hair) EYE COLOR:Amber Likes:Blading,reading,writing,drawing,helping others,protecting my friends,and fights(they rule!) Dislikes:My enemies,made fun of,losing,and my friends gitting hurt Weakness:My friends(care about them alot!) and my adopted family(was left to die by real family at age 5) Personality:Is a bitch when people don't know me but that changes when people git to know me. Loves to protect friends(if i git any). Has a locked up heart cuz of real family. Doesn't show any emotions until Tyson comes along. Clothes:Your choice, as long as its black,silver,blue,and crimson Person I would like to be paires up with:TYSON!
 Title: PICK ME!
Reviewed By: dark_demon_princess [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 08, 2004 19:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
 Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Master Duelist Kaori [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 08, 2004 16:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! You put me in your fic! Thanks!Anyways I almost have the first chapter done for my story.
 Title: Character
Reviewed By: Mikin Ishida  On: August 08, 2004 15:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi! I wanna be in your fic!! Name: Mikin Alexandros Age: 15 Hair/Eye Color: Brown (hair is shoulder length) Clothes: Orange Tank top and blue jean shorts, brown boots and black finger less gloves Personality: A sweet and understanding girl who is always there to listen and help out a friend. Gernerally a happy girl. She can also be quiet at times and wishes only to be loved by someone. Likes: Soccer, Music, writing, singing, drawing, duel monsters! Dislikes:Lighting,storms Weakness:...ice cream lol it's true! Fears: Being alone since she lost her family in a ship wreck years ago and now lives with the family that adopted her. Person to be paired with: JOEY!!! ^^
 Title: Character
Reviewed By: Mikin Ishida  On: August 08, 2004 15:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi! I wanna be in your fic!! Name: Mikin Alexandros Age: 15 Hair/Eye Color: Brown (hair is shoulder length) Clothes: Orange Tank top and blue jean shorts, brown boots and black finger less gloves Personality: A sweet and understanding girl who is always there to listen and help out a friend. Gernerally a happy girl. She can also be quiet at times and wishes only to be loved by someone. Likes: Soccer, Music, writing, singing, drawing, duel monsters! Dislikes:Lighting,storms Weakness:...ice cream lol it's true! Fears: Being alone since she lost her family in a ship wreck years ago and now lives with the family that adopted her. Person to be paired with: JOEY!!! ^^
 Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: Ruiki [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 08, 2004 14:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
*bows* Arigato for including me in your story, I'll look for your update.
 Title: mess-up
Reviewed By: padfootop [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 05, 2004 18:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
weakness... i messed it up... but her weakness is music... she can't help but listen if someone's playing, but she won't let it be very noticable...
 Title: continued....
Reviewed By: padfootop [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 05, 2004 18:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Likes: she like playing her guitar, listening to her music, singing, beyblading/duel monsters [whichever]. Dislikes: snobs that think they are better than everyone else. Fear(s): she has a fear of the water, like big bodies (ocean, bay, harbor, lake). her mother drowned in a boating accident when she was 7. Misc: (Anything else I missed) her history! if you want it... when Sakuya was little her father died from cancer when she was born, and her mother drowned in a boating accident when she was 7. Her brother has been raising Sakuya all her life and she's become very alone in the world. Since the death of their parents, Sakuya didn't see much of her brother [he was alway working]. She learned how to handle herself, and do things on her own. She started blading/dueling a couple of months after the death of her mother. She didn't really rely on her brother for anything, and she hasn't made any friends. Sakuya is trying to find some where she can fit, but she suffers from a slight case of depression [it hasn't been diagnosed because they can't afford to go in for the testing]. She doesn't have much in her life, but she makes the best out of what she can. Her music and blading/dueling lets her escape her own word and hide in another world where she doesn't let anyone in... Person You Want To Be Paired Up With: Kai, Kaiba, Matt, or Ray
 Title: my character
Reviewed By: padfootop [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 05, 2004 18:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name: Sakuya Tseke Nickname: S-uya, Tseke, some times just Sakuya Age: (All the characters are 15) Eye Colour: ice blue Hair Colour: silver Clothes: white tangtop, tan cargo pants, boots, a gray hoodie is wrapped around her waist Personality: she is a quiet person who hates it when people think too high and mighty of themselves. she believes those people need a good beating, and she can deliever it. normally Sakuya likes to play the peacemaker, if she hasn't already caused the problem. She doesn't like being told what she can and cannot do. if she had a choice, she wouldn't be around people, but she doesn't know what drives her into groups. She doesn't go out to impress anybody. she is very solitary and can handle siutations on her own [she believes]. she has too much pride and doesn't ask for help even if she needs it. Weaknesses: not communicating when something's wrong will continue...
 Title: Well, lets give it a try
Reviewed By: Oceano_Azul [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 01, 2004 12:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name: Ainu TakaraNickname: AnjoAge: 15Eye Colour: SilverHair Colour: Black with two strands of silver, curly, that reaches the middle of her back. She usually wears it in a ponytail, with a white bandana.Clothes: A pair of baggy grey pants and a white top, with a black dragon on the front. She wears a pair of white and black sandals.Personality: Ainu is a happy person, who's always around, prepared to bright everyone's lives. She likes to make people laugh, specially when they're sad. However, when night comes, Ainu gets really loner because she enjoys to be by herself, while looking at the stars and moon.Weakness: Mint or chocolate ice-cream.Likes: Painting, swimming, cooking and reading. She also writes poems and loves black cats.Dislikes: Pink and people who think that are better than the others, just because they can do something everyone else can. She also hates dresses and black metal (music).Fears: Spiders and nakes.Person you want to be paired with: I'm probably asking for the impossible, but: Kai or Kaiba Misc: Ainu wears a silver chain with a silver heart, which has the inicials of her parents' names on the back ('S' and 'A', just to let you know)By the way, I wanted to say thank you for the e-mail with the attacks that you sent me (before you start to freak out, let me tell you that's Lisa Midnight Oceans here). Well, good luck!
 Title: Kyra Yagashi (continuation)
Reviewed By: midnight_tear [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 30, 2004 18:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Misc: Kyra keeps dreaming about the one who'll break the walls she builted around her in an attempt to prevent herself from falling, but she can't admit that she's developing a crush in one (she usually blames the well-known 'teenager hormones'). Yet, Kyra starts doing everything she can to bring the walls down and tell the guy she likes, her feelings.Person You Want To Be Paired With: Tala or Kai, but if that's not possible then Kaiba or Matt (Yamato) Just a thing, can you please warn me when the 1st chapter is posted? Whenever my OC is choosen or not, I just want to read this fic. Thanks!
 Title: MY OC (Kyra Yagashi)
Reviewed By: midnight_tear [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 30, 2004 18:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name:Kyra YagashiNickname:Lotus Age:15Eye colour: Acid red, with swirls of greenHair colour: Dark red with two black streaks Clothes: Baggy black pants and a dark red top, which has a black tiger in the middlePersonality: She's a real loner, especially when she doesn't feels at easy (people often think she's shy), but once she starts knowing people Kyra is one person to have around, especially when someone's sad. Kyra has a great capacity to make people smile or even laugh, usually through words or some funny comments/jokes. However, when the subject is serious, beware, the tiger is watching (hehe) and prepared to stick to her believes. Kyra is very independent and responsible. Nevertheless, Kyra enjoys her space and her freedom.Weakness: Chocolate and Kyra's own heart. Kyra finds it very difficult to express her feelings, especially to the one she loves, which causes Kyra to get into troubles.Likes: Music, swimming, writing, horse riding and telling stories. Kyra also enjoys taking care of kids and watching the moonlight and rain.Dislikes: Pink, skirts/dresses; people who are too self-centred, people who think that are better than everyone else, horror movies and mushy stuff. She hates boys due to an old passion she had and that didn't worked, but that changes when Kyra starts falling for someone.Fear:Thunders. (need to continue in another review, sorry)
 Title: Hmm...
Reviewed By: BlaqueDragons [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 29, 2004 02:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name:Joan Oran Nickname:Jo, J.O. Age:15 Eye Colour:Brown Hair Colour:Black Clothes:Baggy black pants with lots of pockets and zippers and a loose white T shirt with a dragon and phoenix encircling each other. Personality:Joan is very quiet and an excellent drawer. She likes to think of fanciful things such as dragons and phoenix's. She glares way too much at Tea, Mariah, and Sora because they always either ask her too many questions or are just THERE. Refuses to believe in love and happiness... Weaknesses:Too quiet, shuts herself away too much, spills out emotions when someone says something about her drawings, good or bad Likes:Quiet, sereness, dragons, phoenix's, cats Dislikes:Tea, perky people, preps, MARIAH, Sora Fear(s):Crying, showing emotions Misc:She has two X shaped scars on each arm Person You Want To Be Paired Up With:Kai, Matt, Marik, Ray, Tala, or Yami Bakura
 Reviewed By: Neptune_Spirit [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 28, 2004 12:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Name: (last and first) Helen (doesn't have a last) Nickname: Helen Age: (All the characters are 15) 15 Eye Colour: Dark Brown (think Kai) Hair Colour: Black, down to her waist, blue rose in the right side of her hair Clothes: Black t-shirt saying"Angelic", blue jeans Personality: Calm, playful, sarcastic, sorta shy Weaknesses: (Like you can't resist sugar ect.) Flirts a little too much... Likes: Beyblading, dueling, reading, writing, having fun Dislikes: Stupid people, conceited people, Mariah Fear(s): (Like cats or something..) Fire Misc: (Anything else I missed) Half angel, hlaf human, dark blue angel wings Person You Want To Be Paired Up With: Kai, Rei, Koji, Yugi, Yami, Kai, Kai, Kai, Kai, Kai(okay, I'll stop) I'd appreciate it if you'd add me in.. if you want more info, there's a charcter bio in my profile, and Kai's my first choice for the fic paring, by the way. Thanks!
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