| "Shadow Magic Gone Wrong" Reviews/Comments [ 155 ] |
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 00:31 EST
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Oh, I didn't realize that i get to work at D-Land... cool, I'm so excited! (especially since I've never been there, and probably will never be able to afford to go) Hurry up and get here, I can't wait to meet those hikari's!
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Reviewed By: miko (Tabitha) On: October 28, 2004 18:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful story. I just love it. If you have room I would like to apply for a musicians position, but you can stick at any position really. And keep up the great writing. Thank you for listening.
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Title: A wot of ppl tink were cute!
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 21:02 EDT
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"Paro a wot of ppl tink dat were to cute, dey want to be in pic wit us." "I knows dat tombobber,( does a little eye roll). "Paro since your tuppose to be all high and migby, you know wherb were doeing?" "Why you espet me to knows eberyting Tombbeeber I'm onby chew." "So your da Paro Yami." "I wittle dou and Abu says its a setret he not tewin me." "Oh Ryu wont tell me eder." "Malit won't tell me eber, I know we tan trip Doey ( In and Out Magical appears ) into tellin us. ( Oh Positions will be open till Friday I think that's enough time.)
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Reviewed By: marikandcloe notlogged in On: October 26, 2004 16:56 EDT
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I love your fic!!! Can I be a character? My names cloe and I have green eyes and waist long dirty blonde hair! I hope you update soon. The RyouxBakura and KaibaxJou parts are so cute!!
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Reviewed By: peachgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 16:53 EDT
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Okay I would like to be a character. (I don't know what characters you are refferring to so just pick one) I am Peach and I love children. I can be a bit sarcastic at moments but I am willing to play what they want to play. (Yes that means get down on the floor and play with trucks or dress up in costumes if I have to.) I have shoulder lengnth pale pink hair and lilac eyes. Please use me!
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Reviewed By: Motje (not logged in) On: October 26, 2004 01:42 EDT
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ow silly me you need a bit of a profl ofcourse *sweatdrops* me forgot sorry. Make me what ever you want, though I'm sarcastic, female and (in reallife unfortuantly all kids seem to like me, never ends well though, you might be able to use it, idno). Got green eyes and dyed red hair till my waist. Well if yuo use me, have fun ^^
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Reviewed By: Motje (not logged in) On: October 26, 2004 01:39 EDT
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Feel free to use me anytime ;) -x- Joy
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 00:28 EDT
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I'd love to be involved... make me a Carnie! (ride operator) Hmmm, a good brief bio for you to use I'm sure you would like... Laid back, doesn't appear to care much... smooth talker... make me a male with hazel/green eyes and brown hair that falls straight to the middle of my back, slender, and loves to flirt with all the men that show up with the chibi's!
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Title: Me! Me!
Reviewed By: Wicabeth! On: October 25, 2004 23:08 EDT
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I'll be a vendor, since that's what I'm doing after all XD So I can squeal at the cuteness of them in the fountain! (inside joke between Dark Sanctuary and me)
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 22:26 EDT
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Might I be a cotton candy vendor? I want to give the Yamis pure sugar and food coloring, and then watch them hop around like the sugar high maniacs they are. ^^
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Reviewed By: Malik the Psycho [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 22:26 EDT
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I WANNA BE IN IT!!!*Cackles insanely* They're all so cuuuute n.n *is hyper from cookie dough* o.O YEAH!!! I wanna deal with the little Yamis XD It'll be fun..GREAT FUN *Maniacal laughter*....*coughs* Yeah. I dont care what you place me as, but I wanna blow something up and then maybe kidnap the Yamis and teach them how to be evil...er!!! *evil laugh* ok, I'm joking. It's your fic, I dont really care. But still....>>..
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 19:28 EDT
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Must_resist_urge_to_glomp... Awww! I love Bakura's "//I had to mate da tunnels for da Tombobber's to dat dey tan teal from da Paro's Pawace//" he's just so adorable! Squee! ^^ Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Beysie (I don't remember logging out!) On: October 25, 2004 01:47 EDT
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Awww, this was so cute! Those chibi yami's deserve to be hugged to death! They sound so much like regular kids... It just makes me laugh so hard! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what you have in store for them next.
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Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 13:39 EDT
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That's so wunny, I ely wuv this story. No seriously it's good! I'm laughing my ass of a lot!
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Reviewed By: darkprincess288 On: September 29, 2004 15:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this story! It's sooooo histerical. I'm literally rolling around laughing. You've probably heard this a lot, but please hurry up with the next chapter. Please, please, please, please????? Oh, and please? (Imagine me with puppy-dog eyes.)
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