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Reviewed By: Webtester01 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh. I wonder how Goten is going to react. Please update.
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: September 30, 2004 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
NOO Oh not fare Now what will happen to the two boys Poor Goten Up-date soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: September 18, 2004 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, Wow good for Goten...but sad too hope you update soon Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Foxxy Jones On: September 15, 2004 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More More I must have more and a sex scene please
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: ladykatt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hiya well yes alittle childish but is that normal for boys? I realy like this fic keep up good work up-date soon I would love to see goten dump her on her but! ok got to go bye bye LAdyKATT
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Reviewed By: Foxxy jones On: August 23, 2004 19:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
you got to up date soon
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Reviewed By: Foxxy Jones On: August 10, 2004 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update now this great can't wait till next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: August 10, 2004 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ok now that was cool Vegeta gee how sweet in his own way he showimng he cares Any way Hope Trunks wins Goten from spoild brat! Up-date soon please Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: swiss miss On: August 02, 2004 23:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yes! more! more! more!
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Reviewed By: Foxxy Jones On: August 02, 2004 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update i really enjoy this story!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Cool realy good Bras is a pest! Up-date soon Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it is good so far looking foward to next chpter up date soon LadyKATT
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Title: My myself and I
Reviewed By: Blue 1/2 On: July 30, 2004 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yum. I'm reviewing cauz I want to give out my 'I-read-this-fic-and-it-kicks-butt' award, even though you may not like it, but you shall wear it or bleed from your pores!!! ... uh, hi. I like it lots, and I wanna read more, please!!!
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Title: ^____^
Reviewed By: Khandy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was great! I can't wait to read more. I love the tension between Trunks and Goten, they are by far my favorite yaoi couple. I look forward to whatever else you have planned. Although, Bra not caring about Pan is a bit harsh. I like Bra/Pan friendship, and that's about the only complaint I have for this story. If you can even call it a compliant. BTW, Bra/Goten aren't going to get together, or have sex for that matter? I'm probably the worst fan of that couple... then again, even if you do write something between them, i'll read it. It just that it looks to me Goten is far too devoted to Trunks to mess around with his sister. And I would prefer it if Trunks/Goten stayed with each other, its hotter that way. LOL! Once again, awesome story. Please update soon.
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Title: =p~
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA NOTLOgged in damn it On: July 29, 2004 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! I loved!!!! SIRED HURRY THE HELL UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPPY!!!!!!! IM DYING HERE*fakes cough and choking* OH boy this is intriging...Bra is after lil chibi Goten and Goten well....Trunksie pooH!!! *sighs* I LOVE YOU!!!!! Ahem.... eh like a lil Geta and Bulma lemony wont be bad they r fightin too much but thats ok they are old and BUlma is senile *LOL*!!!!! SENILE I LOVE THAT WORD SO FUNNY!! UPDATE SOON!!! LATER!>:)
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