| "Quest" Reviews/Comments [ 162 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena (LadyKATT) On: October 07, 2004 22:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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BAD BAD I am hanging here cliffys are bad for the health. Please up date soon Yea I think I know and oh so looking forward to Vegeta and Goku putting them in thier place Grate work Up-daye soon Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: vegetaswoman On: October 07, 2004 19:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well Its really good just like maintaining i relly like i think ur writing is totally amsome anyways keep up the writing i thrive on it^.^
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Reviewed By: debbiechan not logged in On: October 02, 2004 13:23 EDT
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damn you girl. I thought this fic was going to be an interesting afterthought to Maintaining--I didn't expect it to get all exciting and suspenseful and fun so quickly. You are an addiction, you know. You write in a way that glues people to their monitors. You could probably make a fortune writing serials for t.v. or something....Come to think of it, there should be yaoi t.v.....an all-yaoi network...I can dream, eh? debbiechan
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Title: Chappie 12
Reviewed By: Plyric (too tired to sign in) On: October 02, 2004 00:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Those damn kais!!!!! ARG!!!! Plyric *ties them up in one big ball and throws them into the nearest black hole!!!!* ARG! *passes out cold.*
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Title: "Quest"
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 20:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon...please hurray..maria
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Title: "Quest"
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 20:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon...please hurray..maria
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Reviewed By: D On: October 01, 2004 09:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!!!! Keep going it's an amazing story--what talent!
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: October 01, 2004 00:16 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi yep I am getting there Good chapter and it fits so well with what has bin happening One thing thogh who is `They` Up-date soon LadyKATT
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Title: hiya Queen of Evil Cliffhangers
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 22:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was the best by far--beautifully constructed and full of terror and pathos and lots of characterization done with quick full strokes (I loved Chi Chi saying "give him a minute, hon"). And another *&^%*^$### cliffhanger. Oh you are truly evil. Sorry I haven't been reviewing much lately. RL and my own fics. Hurricanes do you better than they do me--we were hosting lots of people fleeing New Orleans when they thought Ivan would hit there (whew, that was close). I am in awe of how strong this fic keeps up after so many chapters (I'm including the whole Maintaining arc!) debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 08:05 EDT
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**sniffing, wipings eyes** you evil pixel goddess, poor poor Vegeta and Kacky WAAAAAAAA **balling** its so unfair. **pulls herself toghter** Sorry..... **sniff** Bulma will come up with something right? **shiver sighs** Hey Pixel can I ask you a question? How do you do it? all these reviews, how do you get people to review your stories? I ask for reviews and I just don't get them. I'm starting to think my writting just plain out sucks. >.< well enough whining. Please Please help poor Vegeta and Kacky, after everything they have been though they deserve to be happy. Wind to your Wings, Kethry
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: September 27, 2004 01:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yep you did it again but it is fine hope you are right cuase they deserve to be happy and I will try to forgive her she might understaind better now why e is the way he is. I hope the weather inproves for all you down there. Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 12:52 EDT
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NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Vegeta! Don't say it!!!! Don't think it!! **hides** This is not going to turn out good. I hope the Ki dampeners work! AAAHHHH. **goes to the ANs** Evil plot bunnies! **grabs it and trys to skin it quickly, but is laughing to damned hard and drops it** Darn sorry. **Goes after it**
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Title: 0_o
Reviewed By: AltairKaosu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 11:36 EDT
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Oh lord...evil cliffhanger! Now I'm going to be biting my nails until you update again. *gnaws* It's a fantastic continuation to 'Maintaining' though. I love it, and I really hope everything turns out okay in the end. Like I said before, I'm a sucker for happy endings. Keep up the great work!
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Title: Chappie 10
Reviewed By: Plyric (not signed in) On: September 23, 2004 10:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG OMG! Bulma can be self-centered to fatality's-end sometimes, can't she? I wonder if she'll live through the next chapter, or if Goku will be able to instant transmission them out of the house in time before Vegeta kills Bulma! OMG! MAJOR CLIFFHANGER!!!!! =)))) MORE MORE MORE MORE!
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Reviewed By: Renzuite On: September 23, 2004 02:49 EDT
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I...drew you a picture of Vegeta.. doing arts and crafts.. It's very amusing, actually. I think long ago I said that to make him happy again that he needed a new hobby. Anyway, on to reviewing this chapter: BEST CLIFFHANGER IN A LONG WHILE. I was happy. Right now I'm in the dark because my roommate is sleeping, but I really wanted to read this before I went to bed! Yay! Now there are bugs flying around my monitor, attracted to the light. Man, Bulma sucks in this fic. Usually I love her. (Holy crap a lady bug! I didn't know they like light!) And Chichi rocks. I've always liked her. Except in Firefly's fic lol. Okay going to go now before more bugs land on me, mesmorized by the light of my monitor. Good show.
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