| "Journey Across Time" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Title: ch 6
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 20:51 CDT
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*blinks* When you really want to teach these guys a lesson you really go whole hog don't you? Since the poll would be rather uh pointless for me to do I won't bother. But now you have me wondering as to what sort of demon you will get all of the guys to face when they DO fight! Will Kag and Sango give some pointers or will the kids do that?
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Title: ch 5
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*laughs* This is soo priceless! Thanks soo much for writting this fanfic. I'm kind of disappointed that InuYasha and Miroku are not in this, but I can easily understand it for your plot! So you hooking Kag with Dou? Not a bad choice. Now I can hardly wait to see how you put Sess-sama's reaction to these guys and his relationship (protective instinct?) towards Kag and Sango and the children.
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 16:43 CDT
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I love this story, espciall with Duo and Kag. plese update soon
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Reviewed By: shadow girl 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 13:16 CDT
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Please update!!!!! UPDATE!!!! I wanna kitten!! Can I keep one? Please? *makes those so cute chibi eyes* Oh! before I forget, CANDY!!!! *throws candy in air* ME LOVE CANDY!!! YOU HAVE SOME TOO!!!! *stuffs candy in random persons mouth* *random person chokes, and dies* Oops? *stuffs body in a frigde in the supermarket* I DID NOTHING!!! ^_^ *everyone stars at me 0.o* ^-^;;;;;; I'm guessing you guys are scared of me...YAY!!!!! WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! (I just had ice cream!!!!) Oh! UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: badgerdoggy On: October 15, 2004 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it. update real soon
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 20:58 CDT
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fun. who was watching them? update more soon!
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Reviewed By: priscel--- On: September 25, 2004 22:20 CDT
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oi they're a bunch of meany heads! five Duos aren't that bad...*drifts off into fantasy land*, then sighs* will we see the yaoi pairings? ya know 1x2, 3x4, maybe 5xSango? hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shellness On: August 24, 2004 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really been enjoying this fic as it progresses, it's an original plot that continues the Inu Yasha series sensibly. It's a crossover I haven't seen before, too. Please add more chapters! Thanks ^_^ Oh! And bring in Relena, but the bashing version. That would be fun -evil laugh-
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Reviewed By: white miko On: August 15, 2004 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a good story but can you tell whos thinking and sayong what it gets confusing
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Title: *one more thing*
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 23:29 CDT
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How old is shippo? Kagome said its been nearly a decade so Shippo looks like a 16 year-old? so aren't the G-boys the same age?
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Reviewed By: priscel *hugs her dreamduo Plushy* [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 20:08 CDT
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Leave her out! lol i couldn't believe Duo got Shippo to do that! man this is an interesting fic. More action! more gore! more violence! MAN since demons or miroku's case -priest- have violet eyes does this mean Duo eyes could have another meaning in futal japan. *looks at author with hopeful eyes* really, I'm not a fan of duo-torture...umm well not most of the time..OK I admit 65% of the time I'm a fan but *pouts* when he's endanger the other pilots reveal that they care more for him and that their particular treatment of Duo in this fic as if it was all his fault would even things up a bit. up date SO oon!!
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Reviewed By: CYOA Athrunxyou luver [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 22:24 CDT
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update soon! And if you put that pink little prissy ass whore (excuse my fench) in the story I will tare you limb from limb!!! So thats a no relena vote. Sorry for any bad spelling and I stand with my threat!!!
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 22:44 CDT
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this is quite interesting. what are the pairings?? update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Brio~the fuzzy cat thing On: July 30, 2004 22:04 CDT
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*woosh* i like this crossover, havent seen one like it before ^_^. i say, bring in the princess-pink....but let sesshy-sama kill her, ,bring her back, then let heero kill her *evilness* in other words, Bring her in (bashing version) is likeing how you're portraying duo, but so far, trowa is totally unnoticable... is also enjoying the 'conflict' between sango and wu-man*is an avid duo fan"power to the braid"* also loved the prank duo an' shippo pulled on hee-chan. much love and luck in writing the imortal"you can try and kill me as many times as you want but i'll always come back like in that annoying as hell song" Brio~the fuzzy cat thing
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 20:40 CDT
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OOOOOOO! great story, its totally hilarious!!! and NOOOOOO! don't bring Relena in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the world would suffer!!!!! that is, unless you make all sorts of hilarious bad things happen!!!That would rock. well, update soon!!!!^___^
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