"Dark Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kiaba's litte sister On: October 09, 2004 20:06 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: PLEASE don't say that this story is over (bursts into tears) you're KILLING me here. Please update, you just CAN'T leave all your fans hanging, and what about the friend you wrote the story for are you just gonna spit in her face and tell her that you "don't feel like doing this for her or us any more" because I wouldn't do that to MY friends.
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Reviewed By: Salsa!! On: September 24, 2004 16:50 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hiya! This was a very interesting ending! I wasn't expecting it.... So this is done for good, huh? Hmmmmmmm....Knwong me, I'm probably gonna beg ya to do a full-blown fantasy...but I'll let that be up to you.... As for me, I'ma be changin' up some thangz...I'll check ya lata! Keep writin' gurl!! Love ya! ~Crazy
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Title: Hehehehe.... Reviewed By: Salsa!! On: September 24, 2004 16:13 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hehehe, me loved this!! I could read this over and over....And I am having some interesting thoughts of something to write. Welp, I check ya lata!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 10:26 CDT Comment/Review: WOW. 0_0 Very much worth the long wait. ^-^ Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Jamie the dragoness On: September 14, 2004 15:04 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: UPDATE THIS NOW! I'm DYING for a new chappie! >.
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Reviewed By: Pearlie On: September 06, 2004 16:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Come on update already!
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Reviewed By: cyoAngel On: September 06, 2004 16:38 CDT Comment/Review: I know you said that instead of typing Yami Marik you were just gonna type Marik because it went better, but I think if it's really supposed to be Yami Marik then leave it at that otherwise good story!:D
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Reviewed By: Davis On: September 06, 2004 16:32 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: O.O She almost went all the way with him! Update, update, update, update, update!
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Reviewed By: Sarah the demoness On: September 05, 2004 22:09 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: PLEASE, MORE, SOON, NOW, NEED NEW CHAPTERS TO LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE!
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Reviewed By: Devine Serenity On: September 05, 2004 22:06 CDT Comment/Review: You are KILLING me with no update please add more soon!
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Reviewed By: Dawnna On: September 05, 2004 22:05 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: PLEASE UPDATE NOW BEFORE I DIE! (falls down dead)
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Reviewed By: Samus Aran On: August 29, 2004 11:51 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Lady Crystina On: August 19, 2004 16:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Finaly, I've been waiting forever for someone to write a Yami Marik/Serenity fic! It's my absolute FAVORITE pairing. PLEASE update ASAP! Thank you! :)
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Reviewed By: FIRE FOX3212 On: August 06, 2004 01:08 CDT Comment/Review: MORE!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 00:19 CDT Comment/Review: Serenity/Marik? Interesting pairing, never thought about them together. This sounds good. Update soon! Hehehe...'ominous' rod ^-^
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