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Reviewed By: Suzuko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 03:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really have not read such a well writen fan fic like this in such a long time Naruto wise that is this is a really really good fanfic.
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Sweet Jane On: November 14, 2004 20:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that was freakin awesome! Very well done, *claps hands* Naruto/Sakura pairing = VERY sweet :) Hope you write more with this pairing, I'd read it.
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Reviewed By: Arashihawk On: October 08, 2004 12:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story here, You present a believable situation that is great to read. The sex scenes help drive the story along instead of being the entire story.
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Reviewed By: Marrion On: August 21, 2004 02:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
If you want more feedback, you might want to post this on adultfanfiction.net. They are hungry for well-written, well-plotted lemons there!
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Reviewed By: GeshronTyler [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 06:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm glad I read your profile on ffnet a bit more thoroughly, or else I'd have missed this one. ^_^ I enjoyed this take on a possible Naruto/Sakura relationship. I like angsty, serious treatment of characters, especially if the piece ends with a pleasant resolution. "They fall in love and live happily ever after" quickly grows stale after all, so a messy relationship that has the characters muddle through it (and an author that takes the time to work throught it ^_^, appeals to me. This story is an interesting contrast to "Complications" and "Interlude: Life of a Modern Kage", but then the author conviently removed Sasuke as a possibility for a relationship, and so Sakura and Naruto had less issues to work through. ^_^ I look forward to your next work. Especially if it concerns Orochimaru's destruction. =P Geshron Tyler
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Reviewed By: Daknessvoid101 On: August 14, 2004 11:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...just wow. I absolutely loved this! The characterization, style, description and depth were all excellent! I believe that I have also read some of your works on FF.net, and as I recall, those were just as good! It is so rare to find a lemon that is more than just mindless sex, but actually portrays emotional depth, and explores sexuallity instead of exploiting it. I am very glad that I found this.
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Title: hmr
Reviewed By: hmr On: August 11, 2004 16:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! GREAT! BEst! More>? please... Great job!
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Title: three thumbs up!
Reviewed By: keishiko On: August 05, 2004 10:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
absolutely excellent. an intelligent, perceptive, precise, honest look at a fuck buddy relationship--definitely no easy feat. and yet not just an endless self-indulgent wallow in angst either, but a sensitive, mature work that actually isn't embarrassed to be all about love after all. i've never even seen a single naruto episode, but i didn't really need to--so that's probably another compliment for you. ^.^ i salute you truly! ^.^
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Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 10:44 EDT
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That was so sad. I feel so bad for Naruto and Sakura really needs a smack in the head, it sounds like Ino knows this too. Wonderful writting. cdk
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Reviewed By: Janet On: July 31, 2004 20:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic plz continue to write more. I love the Naru/Saku pairing there should be more of those. I will be waiting for more of your work.
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Reviewed By: Wolfstein [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 11:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, sexually explicit but in no sick way. Truely a piece of art.
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